Bouncytales logo animation!

[i play atari]

sweet

[slugo3]

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thats really cool. I really like the bear. he has great cartoonism (new word? :) )

[anticz]

Great stuff as always! Couple nit pick things. Maybe add a slight arc on the wide shot of them flying through the air. Make the pose just before he jumps a little more extreme. It's such a wide shot, seems like it could be exaggerated a little more. Also, add some sort of accent to the collision. Bigger audio cue or possibly stop the camera a couple frames late and actually show the audience what happened, the comedic beat is just a little weak right there. I think that should be a bigger punchline if you know what I mean. Really great stuff overall (I'm jealous :D). You guys are rockin!!

[FaceMn]

Looks cool.

Here's my two cents. The second shot in, their poses are fine, but the timing isn't. Should be snappier.

When the bear runs across the screen, it doesn't look like he has that much weight. I would give him some more bounce.

When the two characters fall into the bears hands, that also looks a bit too slow.

One more thing. the character design on the bear and pink squirrel are great. The mouse however isn't consistent. It doesn't fit in the same world as the other characters. Looks almost like someone else modeled it w/o any direction on the look of the film.

Overall, good job! The pacing is a bit slow too...

Oh, and have the logo at the end slam into the screen faster with some secondary motion. Will add to the cartoony feel your going for.

- Jason

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