beast of burden - character - maxko

[ZrO-1]

It looks like a great start. Welcome to the challenge! Just be sure to keep in mind rule #5 for this challenge...it can't be humanoid ;)

Other than that it looks pretty good. Great start!

[Maxko]

next

[Maxko]

next update :)

[levius]

:bounce: Go maxko Go !!! :thumbsup:

[YoGoLo]

pretty face !
what does the burden will look like ?

[Maxko]

Thanx YoGoLo, thanx ZrO-1 :)


This is new version :) ... my BOB

[Wampa]

Very pretty. Cool !!!

[TES]

Hi Maxko:) great start!!GO!GO!GO!:bounce:

[Maxko]

Hey buddy! :scream:

Hellooo 3D maniacs. What do you think about this Beast... Now I create hand and abdomen. I afraid.... ;( To advise to me?

Very soon I desplay new update of my BOB... today

[Maxko]

OK, next update... What do you think now?

[neilyb]

Great detail in the torso and arms...now sort the legs and feet!

[Crash]

GReat moddeling I wish I could do such things :) . The critique:
the legs lack of proportion, now I know that it was your intention to do so, but now it looks kinda silly, no offense that's only my point of wiew. The tail also needs some work, a little details, maybe some spikes would do the trick. Think bout it. Check my ugly model :p .

[Maxko]

Ouu... thaanx. I'am very happy :bounce:

Now, i'm working on arms, back and tail.

[Maxko]

new tail

[TES]

I think it needs,longer legs,bigger muscles.......and more details:) work work Maxko:))

[Maxko]

Tes: I think, legs is ok. Look

[TES]

looks good,what about the second part?:shame:

[tubby]

your character is lookin good! the head turned out really good, nice detail , i cant wait to see the arms and feet done. the shoulder area needs some attention(like where the pectoral comes up to the shoulder area, the deltoids need to be defined. velmi dobre, that was my attempt to write in slovak, i speak it a little but have no idea how to write it, ahahah:) :)

[Maxko]

a little more details on beast head

[Maxko]

and again :)

[Wampa]

Maxko tak sa mi zda ze sa stale zlepsujes. Stava sa z teba pan umelec. Asi ti zacnem vykat. ::)

[Maxko]

Head with more details.

[Maxko]

Hey Buddy!

Firstly I have tought that this hand will be made by this sketche...
But finaly I have decided that it will be just about 4 fingers not 5. I will make a membranes too... :-)

[Maxko]

This is a view of my work which is still going on.

[Wampa]

No stale je to lepsie a lepsie.
Aj ja chcem take vediet :(

[derwolpertinger]

hey nice work i can see here-but i'd suggest that you make the legs a bit thicker and add more muscles to them. your BoB looks too heavy that those legs would be able to carry him without any probs. and i gotta say that i really dig your muscle definition. :thumbsup:

[dAKAPU]

Maxko: Paskalik robi myslim ze 8 rokov organiku a pozri ako robi svoj beas of burden. Ty robis ovela kratsie a vo svojej technike si sa nasiel nedavno. Ked robis teraz taketo veci, vies co bude o 8 rokov ? Co za osem, Ty ho dobehnes za rok, mozno aj skor jak Ta poznam a to velmi dobre. Takze nemaj tazku hlavu a nikdy sa nevzdavaj. :thumbsup:

[Maxko]

Wampa, dAKAPU: Neprehanajte :)
derwolpertinger: Yes, you are right, the legs are short, weak and not very deteiled. I will upgrate them after I will finish hands. The hands will be finished today. Thanks for replay and critiques, it was very helpful.

[dAKAPU]

MAXKO: ved ty uvidis, ze neprehanam, hehe..

[Wampa]

Clovece trochu viac sebavedomia a sfuknes tu za chvilu vsetkych ako uragan. :)

[Maxko]

I am working on hands, still.

[Wampa]

Z tej tvojej priserky bude plavec ako sa patri :)

[Maxko]

What do you think about the legs now ?? I think, that's good.

[Wampa]

Clovece nie je co dodat. Este vymakaj nohy a si za vodou. Vitazstvo mas v kapse.

[Maxko]

Thanks for .... nothing ... :hmm: :shrug:

I decided that the beast will have a wings. What do you think? Is it a good idea?

Thanks.

[TES]

eeeh budu psat cesky....je tu spousta slovaku:)) je to paradni...sqely detaily na tom spravnem miste........libi se mi ruce....kdyz jeste dopracujes nohy,tak nebude to dodat a bude to absolutelly amazing!!

[ZrO-1]

hey maxko, Very nice modeling on your Bob. It looks really clean and smooth. I love the webbing between the fingers; that's a great touch. One crit about the legs would be that since this looks to be an aquatic or amphibious beast, I might make the legs thinner to be able to contour to the body better when it's swimming. As far as wing's I wouldn't add them. I like your beast as an aquatic BoB.

[Maxko]

Thanks ZrO-1. I'am really happy, you like my beast... My beast like you too :)) :p

[Maxko]

I was thinking about a wings of my creature. Here is the sketche. I tried to draw to show how does it look. What do you think about it??? Should I make a wings?


Sketche is drawn in Photoshop withouth tablet :( It was drawn by my mouse and my hand :)

[Maxko]

In this time i'm creating a foot...
I hate time.. :annoyed:

[tubby]

hey maxko your beast is lookin really good!!i like the concept of the wings im just not sure if you have the time to make them. if you think you can make the wings in time i say go for it!good work!!

[Maxko]

Thank you for replay tubby. Now i'm finishing the foot. Then i will be add more detail on my beast (e.g. on muscles, tail ...).

ouuu... ... i forgot on burden... :( it must be.. isn't it?

[TES]

oooh those wings are sweet:))if you give some claws or small hands(to carry more cargo) instead of those fingers,it would be realy great.......I think..... really GO and finish IT!!!!!!

[Maxko]

Foot update. Good?

[erilaz]

The front of the foot is great, but I think the heel may be a bit blocky. Fantastic work overall!:D

[TES]

woooooooohay :eek: you are going to be the best:)) his foots are REALLY AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!:insane:

[Maxko]

Now i'm creating more detail....

[Maxko]

front... it is not complete.

[Maxko]

What do you think???

[derwolpertinger]

i think your model rocks damn hard!!:buttrock:
but what about the burden? will you have the time to finish it?

[Maxko]

I don't know if i have time. I MUST FINISH IT. :) This night i must work nonstop ... :shrug:

[Maxko]

some wings...

[ZrO-1]

Wow the muscle definition looks great. I have to be honest, I didn't like the idea of adding wings to this beast, but now that I see them on there I like it. The membranes between the 'fingers' of the wings looks absolutely awesome. Great stuff! :thumbsup:

[Maxko]

ZrO-1: thank youuuu :bounce:

This is some update. Ou.. now i must create the burden. I am very tired, because don't sleem last night :( ... because i want finish BoB...

thanks ZrO-1

[TES]

hey hey hey MAxko stop IT :eek: I don´t have any words!!!!IT´s absolutelly great,amazing........and I don´t know what more:buttrock: I like everithing what you update.....his musclec are avesome and his wings are good so...........you BoB is Fuc**** great!!!!!

[erilaz]

That's some hardcore modelling there!:surprised

So much progression in the last day! Fan-brillia-mazing!:eek:

You'd better get a good night's sleep after all of this!

[levius]

Great Progress Maxko !!:beer:

Now, pose it and dont forget harness (postroj) and some burden :)

Go go go :bounce:

[Maxko]

TES: Beast still heaven't detail which i want :(. But i heave't time.
erilaz: I am happy, you like my beast :). Thanks :bounce:
levius: Yes, pose. Now i'm creating the skeleton, them my beast will be in pose.

I don't know if i create burden in the time :shrug:

[Maxko]

with bones...
now follow pose...

[Wampa]

Clovece co robis uz teraz trpim komlexami menejcennosti. Nebol som na nete 3 dni a ty tu spravis profesionalnu pracicku. S tymi kridlami je perfektny. Si fakt velmi dobry. Uz teraz placem kedy budem ja tak dobry ???

[dAKAPU]

It's just perfect modelling, you're better and better. The details are really perfect now. I don't see mistakes :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

[Maxko]

I think, i have few time on burden.


:WHAT NOW???



Thanx dAkapu & Wampa.
:shrug

[Lorenzo]

very nice concept, many details I love it:buttrock: :beer:

[TES]

what did I say.5stars.......congratulations:applause: :scream:

[Maxko]

Some new pictures.

please... rate my thread

[Drongo Stabbins]

Excellent work Maxko!
Great details in the anatomy!
:thumbsup:

[mebamonster]

vel'mi dobre Maxko! Sorry I missed this thread. Wish I could speak slovak fluidly, but i can't...Just what i pick up from my husband and his family ...I can understand it more than i can speak it...and i can speak it more than i can type it...which leaves me knowing pretty much nothing. Oh well.
As for your bob, good work indeed. I like the detail in the musculature a lot. I will keep my eye out for your future posts!

[Maxko]

FINAL! :)



high resolution (http://www.maxko.sk/this/FINAL-.jpg)


thanks to all... thanks.... thanks...

[levius]

You did it ! great work man :thumbsup:

[Wampa]

Niet co dodat. Perfektne.

[placidus]

fakt parada, normalne som prekvapeny :thumbsup:

[Maxko]

Levius :).... am very happy, I finished this beast in this time. I'm started too late. You know.


Dik Wapma :)
wordless: dakujem za pochvalu. Aaaa preco si prekvapeny? CO ta prekvapilo? Alebo ci si necakal? :)

TO ALL: I can't create burden in the time... sorry ...:shrug:

[erilaz]

Maybe you can argue that the beast was YOUR burden, to get it done, therefore it is a beast and a burden all in one!

Viola! No need for a burden!:D

[TES]

no vidis.stihl jsi to a mas zase pokoj:)) konecne se taky vyspis:) ty rendry jsou paradni........

[levius]

Erilaz : yea you are right :), It could be same in my case :cool:

[Maxko]

levius: i'm rendered some new pic of my bob. I think, it's better.

[levius]

:thumbsup:

[Maxko]

hi resolution www.maxko.sk/maxko/final.jpg (243 kb)
thanx to all... :)

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