Enviroment: Versailles

[Dreamwave]

very nice modeling!
I like the details but your lightning and texturing can use some more work...

the shadows look good, but the left side of the picture (where the light comes from) looks too bright...

and the textures lack that bit of realism

[mimo8]

great modelling and rendering
perhaps you also have the rime to give the interior some color
the black glass could take some insight

[Sue3d]

Very nice! You did a great job with the modeling. You could try to put some noise and variation into the color of the building (also, some bump maps would be nice) and maybe add a reflection map for the windows. Very nice building! :)

[Quarob]

Very nice :)

Most of the detail is lost on the left part of the image, you could adjust lighting a bit :P

Keep rocking!

[-JT-]

very nice, it's true it does lack these little "defaults" to make it more realistic but the modeling is very good. :)

[oj3332]

very good modelling! I wish I was as good as that when I was your age!

Same stuff again, give the windows an environment to relfect so they look like they have some glass...maybe soften the image a little with some glow or something from the bright parts...

and with sky like that I would *imagine* that the building would be darker due to the exposure of the camera...or else increase the brightness of the sky and reduce the saturation (not so bright blue)...(I hope that's right guys)...well anyway...try that and see how it looks :bounce:

again great modelling there :thumbsup:

[Dead_Last]

The modeling in this is excellent and very detailed. I agree with what others have said about the texturing. I think it would add a lot to this image if you added some more to the texturing and had some reflection for the windows.

[Trurl]

Very nice work!

Use HDRI-lighting for more realistic
( are You 15...? :eek: )

[mosconariz]

15? Oh... Woooow! Can't believe it, Congrats!

[g2thomas]

It's good enough for a 15 years old people!
I am 23 years old and still don't have and good work! sign... ...

[JohnR]

hey guys, thanks, I am working on the windows right now, and the illumination.
Yeah, I am 15 :D, I started with 3D at 11...so I ll post an update soon.

[didier13]

Ha versailles !

i know very well the city of louis XIV because i was living at versailles near this castle there's 10 years ago (about 800 m from my house).
Modelling is nice (some details are missing )http://www.einmannorchester.ch/gin/europe/2003-1/2003-04-05-paris-versailles-1-1000x750.jpg
http://intranet.arc.miami.edu/rjohn/Spring2000/New%20slides/Versailles%20slides/Versailles%20Garden.jpg

In this place, there's a lot a rain :)) so on your texture smears are missing and the texturing must be worked.

I think the lighting is good.

For 15 years old and a two day work -> it's very very good

:thumbsup:

keep going on like this !

[JohnR]

Hey! Thx to everybody...here is a small update (without final textures)
http://www.robals.com/bro/Versalles_3.jpg

[Wout]

It's looking so much better now with the bump map, now add some small amount of dirt and perhaps some grass to take away the overall clean look. Great work, mate.

[oj3332]

congrats this is looking much better :)

what I would do is lighten the sky but leave the colour levels as they are...and also modify whats reflecting in the windows, so that its not sky all the way down to the ground...I don't know if you have photos of the surrounding buildings...maybe you could find some online...or just find something similar and have some blurred reflections in the windows.

Olz.

[Dead_Last]

I like the new details that you added, and the new texturing and reflections and stuff, even if its not final, adds much more life to the picture.

[Scheppi]

the cloudy sky doesn´t match with yout lighting situation. please use a more sunny image.

[Self-Designer]

Can u please post a zoom-in of the statues and maybe even a wireframe of them? they look nice from here! And i can add nothing more to what has been said, really nice work u did there. :thumbsup:

[ambas]

thats good modeling. Awsome work. Im 14, 15 in 3 months (october). :D

bleehh.. i hope il be that good when im 15. :cool:

[didier13]

Good work, the bump put any life in the texture, now add some dirt to the texture. :thumbsup:

[JohnR]

Hey, thx for the comments:)! I think I have a sort of final image with the textures. hope you like it
http://www.robals.com/bro/Versalles_4.jpg

[Self-Designer]

You can put a shape of a cityline outside of the frame to cast shadows on your building to give the impression there's more then you see.

-caught- -caught- zoom in on statues -caught- ;)

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