TV commercial: "swiat techniki"

[LvP Design]

Very nice done!
5 stars!

[mimo8]

perfect - great - no crits

perhaps you post this better once again in the finished3D area to get more feedback - maya area is mainly used for technical questions (other than lightwave or cinema area where people post there works)

once again - great animation

[mimo8]

only crits I see now watching it more times is the realcamera.

1.st it looks very much like a fimestudio - specially the ceiling doesnt give the impression to be in a kiosk / shop

2.nd the realcamera stuff is a bit dark, perhaps too dark

but you said you were only working on the robo - that is brilliant - also the animation and timing is really good

I specially like the blue discs that are uncovered by this photoshutter

[juicewon]

congrats on the work, nicely done :)
the two things i would comment is that

1: the thing that the guy touches to bring down the robot seems to light up before he touches it.

2: the magazine the robot holds aint completely the same as the guy is reading even though it seems to be the same. the one the guy is reading got a gradient background behind the head, the one the robot is holding seems to have a solid color as a background

except that the video is great,:thumbsup:, even though i coudlnt understand a word they said :P

[retrop]

very good, but there is no reflection of the robot on the talbe ;) however, great work :)

retrop

[monart]

thank you! :)

http://www.swiattechniki.michalmonart.com/gfx/rys_08.jpg
http://www.swiattechniki.michalmonart.com/gfx/rys_10.jpg

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