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AshtrayBabyHead
06-26-2004, 06:02 AM
I'd appreciate some feedback on this one. It's my third rendering and I think it turned out pretty decent. But I'm still learning 3ds max and would like some critiques on how I can make it better. Anyway, this is a graphic I made for my website. Everything was done in 3ds max.

http://www.fetusnegative.com/babyevilblue.jpg


And the wireframe:

http://www.fetusnegative.com/wireframe.jpg

Fnote
06-26-2004, 06:24 AM
Wow, thats really damn cool. Looks kind of Robotic, Very sweet. What lighting setup did you use?

creative destructions
06-26-2004, 06:52 AM
The red eye kind of breaks the image. Can you do one with both eyes closed? And maybe some crusted eyes lashes. Great premise. Floor texture a little blurry.

mind frell
06-26-2004, 07:54 AM
looks disturbing, to say the least... :)

you should think of doing something so that the baby is making disturbances in the ground plane. As it is, the baby's right arm is perfectly protruding. Breaks the illusion in my book. The rest looks fantasic and creepy...

good work

mimo8
06-26-2004, 09:23 AM
technically very good but a bit too creepy for my taste.
(.... I´m living here in belgium for the moment)

RayenD
06-26-2004, 10:09 AM
Technically it is more than ok, but as a piece of "art" it's afwul and bad taste.

Pointless..

jud
06-26-2004, 10:23 AM
I like it,it's very provocative and obviously not meant to be a real child but some robot tossed aside by some factory,I agree that the body should interact with the surface more,but is that water on the surface or is it solid like metal?

jud

Rivendale
06-26-2004, 01:41 PM
Cute baby...I think his look is telling me: What the **** are you looking at?
The surface seems strangely smooth for such a trashy texture. Maybe stronger bump would enhance it some. What were your thoughts on making this? Why is he half way sunk into the ground? Did something happen before?

CML

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