Architectural: Brownstone

[ToddD]

oops! Free space won't allow larger render

http://www.redrival.com/pixelated/bigBS1B.jpg

[WU2]

I like it... brings memories of walking around the upper west side in manhattan...

[ToddD]

Thanks Wu' that is exactly the feel I was going for! I am glad you liked it!:thumbsup:

[Sue3d]

Very nice! I like all those details and textures. I'd probably prefer it with a little brighter and warmer lighting (more like what you have there on the right hand side), but it's nice this way, too. :)

[the_bully]

very good those look like some of the brownstones around upper east side
of mannhattan.A night scene would be cool :thumbsup:

[Daffydd]

Looks great! Very well done. :)

Daf

[ToddD]

Well I adjusted a couple of things, warmed the color slightly, and added curtains to the door, the windows show better now IMO. PLease continue to comment.:thumbsup:
http://img33.photobucket.com/albums/v99/tbonz/postnew2.jpg

[LukaStellwag]

Very nice work, nice... The second one is much better than the first, realy :).

[Sue3d]

Looks great! The curtains on the doors help a lot and I like the colors. :)

[ToddD]

Thanks Sue+Littleluk! I replaced the last render with 1 with the curtains a little curved, also tried to make them set back a bit more. Thanks for the feedback, keep em coming!

Todd

[Sue3d]

You're welcome, Todd. :)
I'm not sure about the curtains; they seem a little too symmetrically pulled aside now. The one on the left also seems a little too curved. I think that when there are curtains on doors like that there are usually curtain rods both on top and bottom of the curtains to keep them in place. So maybe they wouldn't move that much (unless somebody peeked out by pulling them aside - but maybe even then the curtains would pretty much move back in place because of the rods on the bottom). At least that's what I think, but I could be wrong... :)

[ToddD]

Hey Sue, funny thing is I thought they should be straight, but they came across too linear, and undistinguishable. Someone in another forum suggested I try this, it seems to be getting a good response. While I feel they should be straight, they do show up a little better this way, maybe I will make them less symetrical. Thanks again for the helpful input!:thumbsup:


Todd

[duerwa]

The second is the best one:)
I like it

[Lyr]

Really nice work, should probably add an air conditioner to one of the windows though.

[ToddD]

hehe Lyr I can tell you are a NY'er! Tempting, but no, no air conditioner wanna have an old feel to it:D Thanks for the feedback!

Todd

[tricky3d]

well then - how about a pile of take out menus?

and a lazy cat in the window would certainly put this over the top...

..//t

[the_bully]

its looking real good you should add a New York times on the the door step

[ToddD]

Oh you guys are too much! hehe
Tricky I was trying to think of things to add to the interior, a cat, thats a tall order!
Thanks, keep the comments coming!

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