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T-Bear
06-24-2004, 12:07 PM
http://www.stratacafe.com/profiles/images/thorbjoern_laursen/336624200454719.jpg

Hello everyone!

Here is the latest Illustration in the Comercial RoboPhone series.
(It is a series of Ad´s, for a Danish Mobilephone Company)

Well I hope you like it, comments are always welcome.

Cheers :bounce:

blacknoise
06-24-2004, 12:16 PM
well, the idea is nice BUT...

i can guess that on the left side there will be some kind of slogans, txt etc... if that's correct i understand why the background pic is blurred (but maybe the part covered by the rendering should be sharp/in focus?)

i would work a little more on the lighting/textures... it all looks very plastic. like lego or somethin'...

that's my crit... either wanted or not :p

bn

r 2
06-24-2004, 12:24 PM
Nice, but:
Try lightning up the scene a little bit more and give some detail to areas of arms and legs. Also it would be nice to see the wire.
That's a tricky concept there. Keep it up!

tomcruselover
06-24-2004, 12:27 PM
not bad to me.

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