What'd u think.

[kramz]

So . what d u think.......I'm a newbie in Cg. I'm learning maya in school and i want to know if all the money i'm paying for is worth it. Please give me some comments.:bounce:

[Flypaper]

I think it's a good start into the world of CG. The model is all out of proportion, but if it's manga, then it's OK! I don't particularly like the way the lighting or the textures are done, too shiny, and maybe give the eyes a few more polygons so that I can't see the edges. Other than that It's a good style, Keep going, I'd love to see it when it's finished.

[dvornik]

Nice WIP. In my opinion you'll need more work on textures, including the eyes.

As far as geometry it's pretty good. There's something going on at the corners of her nose. The forehead is a bit low - the eyes should be approx in the middle of the head. The bridge of the nose looks kind of angular, should be more smooth. The outer ridges of the eyebrows reach too far, kind of stick out.

The mouth, the eyelids, the jaw are well done in my opinion. Overall it's a nice face, looks attractive. Put some better lighting on her - looks like it's just one light from the front. I'm learning myself, so I may be wrong.

[kramz]

For ur C&C, i' will fix the textures. and i'm bringing the eyes down a little. hopefully i'll have some updates today.

[sarfarazsoomro]

even the lo poly ver looks good....:applause: :applause:

[kramz]

Poly vers.

[wedge2002]

I think that the top lip needs to be a little smaller than the bottom lip. I think that the top is suppose to be the smaller one. Well overall it's pretty sweet. Keep up the great work. Peace.

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