View Full Version : Character : Hot Girl
06-20-2004, 11:10 PM
this is a painting of some hot singer called amal
im sure that no body knows her :)
anyway i hope u like her
i wish to hear some crits to improve my self in the future coz lets face it...
i have a whole lot to learn :)
this is the original that i used as a refrance
done in Photoshop with the mouse except for the left side of the hair was done with the tablet.
coz for some reason i can control the tablet on the right side :)
06-20-2004, 11:36 PM
It looks like your host server has dropped you or something.
06-20-2004, 11:55 PM
Ok i changed it
now it should be working
dont forget to press refresh if it didnt load
06-22-2004, 10:57 PM
can u guyz see the pics or u still have a problem with my server.
or may be u just hate her :)
06-23-2004, 01:34 AM
is she amal hijazi... then you surely did a good job dude.. i love the skin tones.. and you've really captured her eyes....the way arabic women use the eye thinggy...only thing that bugs me is her hair.. i dont like the sytle..hehehe..
good job ...
06-23-2004, 10:22 PM
thank u whitebug
she is amal hejazi :thumbsup:
how did u know her
isnt she HOT
i love her man :twisted:
i excpected that french members might now her coz she made a song with that ray singer called fudel or somthing and he is popular in france i guess
anyway im gonna post the original in the first post so ppl will know how she really look.
06-24-2004, 12:19 AM
No I don't hate her, actually quite the conterary. She looks hot.
I just couldn't see the pic before.
Good job man, it looks a lot like her. I like the eyes quite a bit too.
Most of it looks good, if you add some finishing details like stitching on her jeans and a denim texture to her pants, then I think that the pic will feel less like a basic form and more like a photograph.
Hair is very difficult to make look photo-real, the one thing that you could do to improve it, would be to leave gaps between the hair so you can see her forehead under her bangs (like in the picture, it is very subtle but I think the subtle details make a picture). Right now they look to thick, making her hairstyle look a little off.
Cute girl though.... I like what you have so far. If you want to improve it add more texture and detail. The mesh heart cut out on her shirt would look cool painted but would probably be difficult to do. I definately think that you should add the belt though and jean stitching, it looks too simple with out them. All in all it looks good though, so if you are sick of working on it than it would be fine as is.
06-24-2004, 06:49 AM
It is good but the hair doesnt seem natural. It looks as if it is a solid wig made of wood or something. It doesn't flow, its just there, thats my only crit.
07-10-2004, 09:14 PM
im soooooooo sorry for being soo late :blush:
i didnt want to reply before i fix the hair, then i got busy and couldnt do it and forgot about the whole thing.:blush:
thanx u for ur comments .. i'll try to fix it as soon as i can.
01-18-2006, 12:00 PM
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