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[DMageXVII]

Nice!
Good clean lines and lively characters!
I especially like the braids :). The tall guy's lips and teeth look odd but i can't put my finger on it... maybe it's just me...

The cat really looks like a scumbag! Great expression!!!!


Keep it up,

DragonMage

[dondixon]

no comments?

[Sciatica]

: \ Don't know why nobody commented on this yet.. I don't normally visit this forum but was passing through for the quick sketch.. I think I should come back more..

Anyway.. (all comments are from the characters perspective.. when I say left, I mean the characters left)
Bad:
-The right side of the girls coller seems like its not attached to her shirt.. its sorta.. laying down (hard to explain).. She also has a really odd look on her face due to the combination of exagerated lips and eyebrows.. I think this was the intention, but I thought I would mention it just incase..

-The kids left pinky finger seems to be disjointed..

-The cats left toes are smaller than his right.

-"I" think that the kids right hand when he's on the back of Big Guy should be flat on his shoulder, but I mention that plainly because I would find it more comfortable on the hand.. Once again.. this may be a case of my personal style versus yours.. so ignore if you wish :)

-The big guys shoes are untied.

Now onto the good! :
-The general design on Big Guy is really nice. Very disney-esq (in a good way..)..

-Your characters seem to have a nice spark of life in them

-They are all generally well drawn.. You show good talent towards cartooning.. I would love to see these characters animated :)

-Your using classical tools.. (sure I love wacom tablets.. but its to the point now where its pretty rare to see classical drawings around.. its just a nice to see that the medium isnt dead :) )

I liked your characters.. good work :)

*edit* I looked again and maybe I was wrong about the girls coller.. might have been seeing a vase instead of two faces.. <shrugs> I'll stand by it for now though :)

[dondixon]

hey thanks for all your comments they are very helpful!!


DON

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