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barrack1
06-17-2004, 02:41 PM
This is my very first post ever and my very first render. AWWWW. Done completely with Maya 4.5 in MR. any crits would be welcome. Thaks alot.:thumbsup:

barrack1
06-21-2004, 02:53 AM
91 views no replies thanks alot

geoffb
06-21-2004, 03:27 AM
looks pretty good, maybe try posting a wireframe.

sempiternal
06-21-2004, 05:50 AM
i think maybe that the flag seems a little too bright compared to the rest of the image. any particular reason why you've done a flag?the building seems a little too simple, like the top of it just cuts off. i think also you should maybe make a better quality image, this seems like a pretty poorly compressed jpg.

the flag also just seems to be sticking out of a random point in the building which seems a little weird too.

barrack1
06-21-2004, 09:41 PM
Yea I thought it might have been too bright against the sky also. I was thinking of doing more to the building also. Thanks for the crits.

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