comics pinguin

[Scarlet Dawn]

Looking alright ^_^ but I would take the white shinies off of the "flames?" in the background. I'm not sure why they are there and they are distracting. I would also try working on your hands a bit more as well. I know there is a certain style you are going for but I still think they could be a bit more detailed.

[qmas]

I go tested,to corrected that

[qmas]

This is the new version of the first drawing
http://membres.lycos.fr/masdesign/pingouin/couverture2.jpg
I think is better

[qmas]

And a new version http://membres.lycos.fr/masdesign/pingouin/couverture.jpg

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