10 sec clip "Gollum"

[kassun]

an update. Changed his hand movements and finaly put in the holds for his poses. I sped him up as he walk's to the store window. I haven't reworked his arms as he walks up yet. That will come in the next post. Thanks for your help. Also I am rethinking the camera angles.

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comments and crits appreciated,
Kassun

[doms]

hmm.. looks like a puppet. Sorry to sound negative but it seems really bland, like he's moving not acting. I know its obviously at an early stage but i can't see the chareacter thinking (which is what makes it a character not a puppet). Do a character personality profile so you know what he's thinking and why and animate from that, also act it out yourself infront of a video camera and get Ed Hooks- Acting for Animators.

Have fun...

[kassun]

I changed the camera. Suggestions appreciated. Animation still is a wip.

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[kassun]

Here is an update. I Haven't done anything with the parent. I should have the kid done in the next few days when i have some time off. Rip it apart and let me know what i am doing right or wrong. It's the only way I am going to get better.

doms: np :)


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[kassun]

Another revision, working on the dads poses. comments and crits appreciated.


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