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Edouard
06-14-2004, 09:25 PM
This is just a window I made to create the style of my new animation project.....C&C are welcome

http://www.want-ed.com/picturesupload/raam.jpg

http://www.want-ed.com/picturesupload/raamwire.jpg

Rhid1en
06-14-2004, 10:25 PM
good start. The main piece of torn wallpaper looks really good, now add a little variety to the other ripped pieces, to clean of cuts right now. I'd also add a little texture to the wall behind the wallpaper that is showing. the only other critiques I have, is out the window looks a bit flat, but that may be the style you're going for and that you may want to play with your lighting/shadows some to either make it look a bit more realistic, or stylized.

Edouard
06-15-2004, 02:51 PM
and a little update...

http://www.want-ed.com/picturesupload/raam1.jpg

-cain-
06-15-2004, 05:32 PM
great work! the dolls hanging give it a nice touch

Edouard
06-15-2004, 07:07 PM
and here is a little update

http://www.want-ed.com/picturesupload/raam2.jpg

c&c are welcome

Ilikesoup
06-16-2004, 04:00 PM
OMG! That looks beautifully ugly! Really nice work with the peeling wallpaper. Only two crits. The dolls hanging from the window look too clean. Is it worth mussing them up and adding cobwebs? Also would like to see more glare on the window, especially on the broken edges. Otherwise, great concept and detail.

Duffer
06-16-2004, 11:58 PM
HA! that's awesome, it has a great feel to it. i love the little dolls, i want one as a keychain :)

http://img74.photobucket.com/albums/v224/Duffer1/raamKEYCHAIN.jpg

can't wait for more

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