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Immorta25
06-14-2004, 02:36 AM
dave lynch has entered the Machineflesh 2D Challenge.

londero
06-14-2004, 03:15 AM
WELCOME!!!:thumbsup:

the time is short, but the soul...

force!

see the TEMPLAR project (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=141195&perpage=15&pagenumber=6)

Immorta25
06-14-2004, 05:32 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3733/3733_1087191179_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3733/3733_1087191179_large.jpg)

Egypt reimagined. Osiris has been forever locked in a pyrimid tomb in his new form of mummification.

MrFreeman
06-14-2004, 05:42 AM
:wavey: Lovely sketches and interesting concept....

keep the WIPs coming as time is nearly over...great start and good luck with your entry:thumbsup: :)

Immorta25
06-14-2004, 06:10 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3733/3733_1087193442_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3733/3733_1087193442_large.jpg)

after working on the some more ideas i finally came up with a vision i was happy with. kinda like a spider hanging down from his web.

Immorta25
06-14-2004, 07:09 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3733/3733_1087196993_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3733/3733_1087196993_large.jpg)

I studied alot of Egpyptian art for color and how it should fit with the design and besides gold i thought blue would look great. at this point i'm still trying to figure out do i want to paint it loose or tight

ardenrey
06-14-2004, 07:22 AM
Nice idea and very nice line work! :beer:

Good luck!:thumbsup:


My machineflesh entry (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=131505&perpage=15&pagenumber=1)

feeesh
06-14-2004, 05:34 PM
cool idea! I like the choice to try out the blue on the piece too but you migt play it down a little so it doesnt look too much like a transformer toy or something. Maybe cuz the background is blue too? Its just too lue right now but it is a good idea as a break from the norm with how egyptian outfits tend to be colored all gold and brown.

-JH

MikeBruinsma
06-14-2004, 07:40 PM
Great Tech!!! Lots of cool techy workings and cool shapes!:beer:

MikeBruinsma
06-14-2004, 08:23 PM
Cool Tech!Machineflesh Entry-Shocktroops (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?postid=1385024#post1385024) :buttrock:

paulwdavidson
06-14-2004, 09:19 PM
It's a nice start, but maybe you could decide on an area you want the viewer to look at, and intensify that section with the hi-lights you have going on already. At the moment you have hi-lights on every element of your machinery.......not allowing the eye to rest in one place.

I think this piece has real potential if you diffused the light a little.

Just a thought

I'll come back to your thread Tomorrow, to give any last crit, on the build up to final submission. I'd appreciate any last crits on mine, also.

Much appreciated, and the best of luck!

Paul



http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=133522&perpage=15&pagenumber=8

Immorta25
06-18-2004, 03:58 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3733/3733_1087531092_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3733/3733_1087531092_large.jpg)

Getting close to the deadline and still working hard. just a couple of more tweaks and i'll be finished.

Immorta25
06-18-2004, 09:36 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3733/3733_1087594565_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3733/3733_1087594565_large.jpg)

Done at last

Immorta25
06-18-2004, 11:49 PM
Thanks guys for the imput it really help me going in the right direction.:buttrock:

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