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06-12-2004, 05:36 PM
this is a character im working on for my demo reel..i assume the anatomy is probly incorrect compared to real life..but i dont intend to model every detail in..hopefully i can fix some things with textures because i plan on having him armoured up
any comments or crits are welcome..thanx
06-13-2004, 03:34 AM
I really like the style of the head.......and for the most part, the physique looks spot on. I'm still trying to get a grip on making the body for my current ptoject. About the only thing I'd say to change are the abs......either they are too high up (which I think is the case), or the space under them to the bottom of the groin is too large. Good work, though.
06-13-2004, 05:21 AM
thanx for the feedback..it's good to know other ppl are liking the look of it..i'll see what i can do about the groin area and see if i can fix that problem with the space being to long..but thanx
06-13-2004, 11:37 AM
It's a good start, and it's a little of both: the abs are too high, and there's a little too much space below them. Doesn't help that the poor guy has no package either. He also seems a little swaybacked--like he's pushing his hips back and the lower end of his ribcage forward.
His eyes may be a little high on his head, too. Though it might be the angle.
Keep it up, and remember that having a good base makes adding to it that much easier.
06-13-2004, 06:59 PM
ah..thanx again for more feedback..i tried lowering the abs a bit and making the space between the bottom of the abs and the bottom of the groin area not so large..as for the eyes..i think its just the angle i believe..i'll post other renders..but i have them placed roughly in the middle of the head[from top to bottom]
i'll post some new updated renders soon..
06-14-2004, 03:36 AM
The upper portion looks great, I really like the style you have added to the head, it looks like it has more character than many models I have seen.
I think the biggest problem so far is how low the hips are. In this picture you have the oblique muscles (love handles) below the third layer of ab muscles, which I see as a problem. I might be wrong about this, but it looks off to me, like the torso is too elongated.
06-14-2004, 07:00 AM
thanks for the new feedback..now that i look at it..i think that your right..the love handles probly are a bit low..im going to move them up and do a test render to see how they look
and im glad your feeling the look of the head..always good to know ppl are liking the look
i'll post an update soon..if i can get some more feedback on the new one..that'd be great
06-14-2004, 08:44 AM
The pecs seem to droop too low before the armpits, I think they'd be stretched a bit higher in this pose. The clavicle should maybe be straighter from this pov, not so concave. Good start.
06-14-2004, 07:21 PM
thanks for the feedback stahlberg, now that i look at it some more..your right about the collar bone there..it is too concave...i'll try to bring it out and up a little..and i'll try to bring the pecs out a bit as well..and see how it looks..i'll post new pics soon..just gotta wait to get back to school..
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