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Hyneria
06-06-2004, 11:17 PM
It's for a challenge of 3dsymax.org forum

I hope you like it!!! :rolleyes:

http://www.usuarios.lycos.es/hyneria/cglain640.jpg


A 1024x768 version (http://www.usuarios.lycos.es/hyneria/CGlain1024.jpg)

puppetmastah
06-07-2004, 12:41 AM
Dude really nice!!! You really captured Laine's room!! Nice lighting too!!! Btw the series were awesome:beer:

syous
06-07-2004, 06:45 AM
technically i cant give any comment coz i suck at it:p
But your pic can be much much nicer if you render with a cinematic angle and some dynamic lightning:cool:

LeeSalo
06-07-2004, 07:11 AM
i agree with syous, the scene is nice, good detail. but it lacks life. you need a beter angle for the camera and some way out lights. Also, and this is just a little also, a few more details. things most people would not even realize are there. lots of detail= emersion.

but, it looks great so far dude!

if you make any changes post them

aeres
06-07-2004, 12:03 PM
The wall textures look out of place, as if haphazardly put together for a render. There is no obvious single light source nor shadows, hence the lack of depth. The glows also seem to be over the top, I would tune it down abit coz it's a tad too distracting.

modeling wise it looks fine albeit it can benefit from more details, especially the girl's leg, right now it looks like a tapered cylinder.

Anvirol
06-07-2004, 01:38 PM
Yeaaah more anime oriented modelling!! Keep it coming ;)

GJ

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