Head Male

[sforsyth]

Looking good. The only immediate thing that strikes me is the crease at the nose.

Is there another one at the bottom lip where it meets the top?

Oh, and the texture seems too shiny.
And finally, eyebrows.

[leigh]

Hehehehe it looks a bit like Biccentenial Man :p
Well, the model seems ok, apart from what Sforsyth has already mentioned :)
The bump map texture is far too big though, and it is too shiny...
The textures actually need quite a bit more work though - get some reference pics of faces, so that you can see how human skin looks, and add that detail to your textures ;)

[actarus6]

To Leigh:
I need your suggest for the bump map, I don't Know how to create wrinkles whit photoshop with thikness less than 1 pixel.
Here some images of edited model:
nose
eyes
geometry around eyes
fractal texture around the eyes, nose and mouth (more red)
:wavey:

[actarus6]

another view

[actarus6]

another image

[actarus6]

Another img

[nez]

you model this with splines ?
nice model but i thing area around the nose and lips need some work
eyes are realy good i like it

[kreno]

it looks more like an old woman's head than a male head... but maybe it's just me....

[actarus6]

It was modeled from box modeling and slice slice slice edit mesh and meshsmooth
I hope to become a good texture maker in the future it need more more add in bump specular and diffuse map.

BYE FROM ITALY

[ZonemaN]

maybe try to consentrate the bump around the nose and stuff sinse it is there the pors on the skin is bigest i think.

[z8er]

looks like hes dead
:D

[Slot]

Good modeling. There are some twiks to make (specially around the mouth and nose, and ears), but I think you are on the right track.

About the face, in my opnion you should make something a little less shine and you surely have to make a bump map not so flatten.

Allright man. In no time you will be mastering 3d.

Keep up.

[actarus6]

what do you think now?

[actarus6]

another image

[actarus6]

another img

[eFDay]

Nice model.You have avoid the typical boring CG look.
But the bump is perhaps too harsh,specially on the jaw zone.
I also think you should do a better observation of the corners of the mouth ,from a photo or in a mirror :).
Go on, it s becoming really cool.

[MiGa]

Looks great. But its perhaps a bit to shiny.


miga

[Beastie]

Yea i think its a great model but you should change the texture. The plastic look with a great bump map is freakin me out!

[actarus6]

:wavey:

Thanks to all for critiques and comments

If someone can suggest something for the pelt texture feel free

Bye from Stefano

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