Environment: house

[Wout]

No replies ? Come on guys, help me out here( please ? :) )

[Sister Ky]

I like the house and the tree in the backround.
I find it strange that the posters are all torn into pieces. At least one or two would still be complete...
The curtain-thing behind the window looks strange. Needs more folds...
The street's too empty. Some little plants, some debris ...even a dead mouse would do to make things look more interessting...

Greetz, Ky.

[Wout]

Aha, a reply,

Thanks for the comments, updating as we speak !

[Wout]

Here's an update
=> UPDATE (http://users.pandora.be/Wouttgh/Straat_Test.jpg)

[Sister Ky]

Yeah, much better. But the barrels and the wheel of the cart are too shiny.

Greetz, Ky.

[Wout]

They are indeed to shiny and clean, thanks again

Updating..

[4 low]

The colors look a bit too saturated. It kinda feels more cartooney than realistic.

[Wout]

And here we have, another update (http://users.pandora.be/Wouttgh/Straat_WIP.jpg)

[Sully]

I think the composition lets this pic down more than anything else, If I were you I would pull out from the scene a little bit add a few more props to take the focus off the cart, desaturate the colours a little bit and work on the texturing and lighting some more..

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