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Latter
07-19-2002, 03:07 PM
I got so tired at looking at this picture half a year ago that I never thought I would finish it. But today I did.
Please tell me what you think. :)

http://mannylatter.freewebspace.com/images/rumskib.jpg

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http://mannylatter.freewebspace.com/images/rumskib.jpg

JFrench
07-19-2002, 03:11 PM
For as bright as the sun is, i would expect a little stronger of shadows. This also makes the helmet look kind of like it is floating. Are the shadows also coming from the wrong direction??
Good textures though.

LostSoul¹13
07-19-2002, 05:43 PM
The space ship looks like the one from Planet of the Apes. Actualy no they didn't had a tale on theirs i think. but never mind. Ya add more shadows and it will be perfect.

Latter
07-19-2002, 08:41 PM
Thanks for the suggestions! :)

The bright spot in the upper right corner isnt the sun, but just a star. The sun is placed behind the camera.
You are right about the missing shadows, so I changed it for this update. I dont know if you can tell the difference, but I hope its a bit better now.

I actually made the spaceship after watching "Planet of the apes"
so the resemblence is no coinsidence. :)


http://mannylatter.freewebspace.com/images/rumskib2.jpg

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http://mannylatter.freewebspace.com/images/rumskib2.jpg

JFrench
07-19-2002, 08:49 PM
Great improvement. Everything looks a lot more solid.

Latter
07-20-2002, 01:50 PM
Just three replies. :hmm:
I hope its not because the picture too bad. If thats the reason please tell me what to change.

behzad
07-20-2002, 01:56 PM
The second one looks much better, I like it, maybe try some hase, or heat effect, or atmospehric effect. mabe some particles in the air. Also the only thing I see wrong is that the texture of the ship does not suit the picture. Otherwise the whole image looks good.

Behzad :lightbulb

satanatron
07-20-2002, 03:17 PM
you need to do something with the windscreen/ front half of the ship...........too dark....need to ad more detail. Scenery looks rad !!!!!

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