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root
07-19-2002, 04:53 AM
Hey all...this pic was done back in the day,
and no one has ever seen it so I need some feedback...

http://www.geocities.com/snailrose/creek.html

I'm just a beginner so take it easy on me
thanks

Root

:thumbsup: :thumbsdow

VShane
07-19-2002, 07:42 AM
Looks pretty good, the ony thing I would adjust would be the focus of your lighting and clearly defining shadow boundries and light entry.

I took the liberty to show how I would approach something like this in Painter 7 (glaze paintover).

http://www.vshane.com/Remote_Art/creek.jpg

http://www.vshane.com/Remote_Art/creek2.jpg

root
07-19-2002, 03:01 PM
Hey...I can really see what you mean by the light entries and shadow patterns...
Next time I break out my pastels I’ll keep what you said in mind

Thanks for taking the time to critique it

Root

jeroentje
07-19-2002, 03:06 PM
Very nice use of colour. Got any more where that came from? :bounce:
jeroentje

Sleepless
07-19-2002, 03:16 PM
If you are just a beginner we are all in trouble.:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

root
07-20-2002, 02:30 AM
Hey...thanks for the comments:surprised
Got any more where that came from?
just one finished, here is a link to it
http://www.geocities.com/snailrose/woods.html
let me know what you think

Root

alchoi
07-21-2002, 05:34 PM
Damn ... nice use of colour ...

Rtv
07-21-2002, 07:07 PM
I agree with jeroentje.:thumbsup:

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