still: pronto

[Tommy5547]

Looks good.
It looks like it's floating in the air. Maybe some harder shadows closer to object will solve it?
Try turn it on so the screen lits up or something.

It is a little boring (no offense) now.

:thumbsup:

[Svenart]

Looks very nice. I agree with tommy about floating, but the rest is well done.

[mariska3d]

Maybe a bit more reflection to give it more depht?

[efrota]

Very good,

Agree with others, try to work, a little bit with the shadowns.

:thumbsup:

[plaguelord]

nice and clean render, I like it.
I agree with the rest about the shadow. Maybe a little bit more reflection and with the screen on could be really nice.

good job!

[The Weed Killer]

Thanks for the comments:) .

The floating problem seems to be occuring because of the height under it which you can't see, it happens in real life too. I made the shadows darker and added a reflection on the ground to help it. Here is a sideview screen shot of what I'm talking about:
http://www.merchant.to/jason/sidescreen.jpg

Which part needs more reflection? The metal covering?

I don't really like it with the screen on. :shrug:
http://www.merchant.to/jason/prontolit.jpg

[Tommy5547]

Wow, a big enhancement there!

Me like it now!

Maybe..juuust maybe work more on the shadows. They spread out to much making it hard so see the shadow edge...

Note: This is extremely non-important crit though...


:thumbsup:


It would be cool to see it in the dark with just the display lightens up... A little glow and that stuff. And a dark blue lamp above to light up the model. And small lights around the buttons.

There. Now I'm done... ;)

[PoPpiN]

nice one

I like your shaders, but i think you'll need more reflection

try adding a white 100% self illuminating box (or 2-sided plane) above the object

and set the materials to process reflection in a fresnel type

this usually gives pretty good results


Ernst

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