Could you give me some advice?

[EvilDan]

Don't do it, life is great :D

[wofle]

:)
i love guns,but i do not like war..

[Rye]

Looks good :) i'm no expert on guns or bullets but i cant see anything wrong with that model. Good job. But the wood texture is a little too strong IMO. I think it takes away from the gun, makes it hard to focus on anything. Either desaturate the wood a lot, or maybe just use a one color plane, like blue or white?

[wofle]

:wavey:

thank you !!!!!!!!!

[boostlee]

i think that the surfaces are too smooth any way.

[Najd]

Yep, Good model.
maybe some scratches would look good (the canon looks too smooth, too new).
and maybe even a bumb to make it less perfect.
And yes, the wood surface may not be the good choice, try something less complicated or saturated.
I would'nt do better Anyway I think.
Can we see the mesh ?

[puddlefish]

Isn't the hole at the end of the barrell where the bullet comes out (technical name?) a little bigger on a desert eagle?
Looks good though!

[Henrik Hörlin]

Well I know some things about guns and this is what I see:

The bullets:
they need a primer (detonator cap) on the bottom on the brass casing. There is always some text om the bottom to tell what kind of ammo it is. For example .50 cal IMI or what ever you choose.
The bullet it self is way to complicated. Make a nice rounded cone, maybee with a flat top.
I'd sugest you find some reference pictures for the bullets.

The gun. Nice over all but the following need to be fixed:
The barrel have no groves, (which is needed to get the bullet rotating around its own axis).
There shuld be darkness in the barrel.
Dirty it up and ad some scratches and you're home free!
I don't know for sure but isn´t there supposed to be some text on the side of the gun? Israili army text stuff?

Keep it up.

[wofle]

thank you all,
there is some text on the side of the gun,but i can not see what it is from the pic ,it is too small...........
i love guns just because i love the Counter-Strike......so i did not know so much about guns(i have never see a bullets of desert eagle).......

http://61.129.67.195/103160105/myasp/upload/upfile/20011221211606.jpg

[matty2x4]

Stay away from guns and cars.....
sheeessssh dont you people get enough.
If I was an employer looking at a bunch of portfoilos and saw some one with a whole heap of guns and cars I would probibly move on to someone with more themes and ideas. Im not says that they are easy to model and texture, in fact yours are very good, but so is the other 1000 I have seen.
matty

[wofle]

:p :p
oh,i like guns and cars.........
you are right,theme and idea is what i need,
i hope i can learn something here,
could you introduce me some good web or book???
i want be better..
thank you ..

[Klaymen]

Very good models, i like the reflections especially. Very nice models indded..
but i agree with matty.. guns and cars tends to get a bit boring in the long run...

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