comments pls?

[DXtreme]

i think the arms have a problem!
but anyway good basic concept..do some work and it would bcome better!

[VShane]

Nice line work, first I would get a reference of a gorilla. preferably an illustrated one as photos are hard to guage furry animals body structure. And finaly, don't cut animals or people off at the feet, put the whole body in unless you have another focus. Keep up the good work;)

http://www.primate.wisc.edu/pin/reichenbachill2.html

http://www.primate.wisc.edu/pin/illustrations/img0246.jpg

[jeroentje]

How is this?
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=12361
jeroentje :D

[MIst]

Add more curve to the contours to give the viewer more feel of the pose of the animal. Try making the lines that advance to the surface of the paper more dark and the lines that go back lighten. Some value would greatly help your picture also.

[chausgambino]

i think you should stand him up and make is top body lean foward. nice sctecth.

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