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LostSoul¹13
07-17-2002, 01:11 AM
Need to desighn acharacter for a 3d game my 1st try didnd't go through. I have created the beggining for a second try but now im stuck.
Lil about the character or the game. think freaky and Frankenshtine (dono how to spell his name). Basicaly one of Franks creation trying to escape from his castle. Made out of day to day things that doctor could have found laying around.
Well this is how far i got.
Any add ons changes to the character or a copleat redisign is welcome.
Thanks for reading and trying to help All ideas will be apretiated.
Thanks.

LostSoul¹13
07-17-2002, 01:41 AM
Oh yea.
This is not for a real game. No company.

LostSoul¹13
07-17-2002, 02:12 AM
any thoughts
Tell me if it sux or what i should replan or redraw. I need all of it.

art7sayan
07-17-2002, 03:59 AM
...well, Frankenstein's creature you want? Maybe that a more detailed crature will be better ...or what do you think about a big failure creature to show why the doctor doesn't want anymore to use it.
But yeah you got a good flavor on this one (but to don't use face will drag the animator on a big work of corporal expression)...
If you want (and if I got time), I can try to add an idea of mine one day lol

:wavey:

LostSoul¹13
07-17-2002, 04:04 AM
thatks Art7sayan.
i will greatly apretiate it. im steel working on this one adding details. I reworked the legs so they would match the body in the robot kinda way and for the facial expretion I extended the whires that go towars up and curved them in the circles so that gave him eyes i might give him floatind eyebrows hold on asec i give u a rough dont have a scaner so will be photoshop.

LostSoul¹13
07-17-2002, 04:12 AM
here ya go
Does it look fine on the composition and desighn side?

art7sayan
07-17-2002, 04:13 AM
:beer: Ok! I will try to make a sketch too!

art7sayan
07-17-2002, 04:15 AM
By the way, is the game will be funny or scary?

LostSoul¹13
07-17-2002, 04:52 AM
Im thinking more of a darck dirty castle look with alot of junk laying everywere So i guess that would fall under a Scarry category. Slanted walls would look like when you drinck toooooo much and you get that closing in effect i guess :eek: Thats why one of the character will be the light bolb for the light effect. Party of 3 one with its own spetiallty light strength and i guess the 3rd the brains. But im not shure yet.

LostSoul¹13
07-17-2002, 04:54 AM
Oh ya padon for my English. im orriginally from Russia so gramatical mistaks will be all over. :bounce:
Also for the facial expretion i was thinking about using the color of the light. Normal:yellowish, Angree: Red, Scarred:White, etc..

LostSoul¹13
07-18-2002, 05:20 PM
so no sugjestion ha? I know im not a good drawer so there must be someting wrong with it? Give me someting.

LostSoul¹13
07-19-2002, 06:34 AM
OOOOOOO
Time for update YEY!!!!!
here are the Front side back I know that side is a lil (ya right) off but i'll corect it in Max while im building it.

LostSoul¹13
07-19-2002, 06:38 AM
LOL Now this will be known as a Gaming Modeling forum. Here a the legs. Just a reminder so people wouldn't go "It's soo edgy" Building for a game 4000 faces to spare. The legs are about 1350.
Well there they are Enjoy :buttrock: :buttrock: :airguitar
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Oh yea Art7 i would stell like to see your imput on the deal. No rush. Just wondering.

art7sayan
07-19-2002, 07:44 AM
hehe! Here is a quick sketch to show you what I was thinkin' of :

:wavey:

Tell me what you think about it LostSoul13!

LostSoul¹13
07-19-2002, 08:53 AM
NIce. Lol dang i suck. This one crys out for good high poly modeling Give me a fronty and if posibly a sidy and i will make it. But ya man you rull. Vive la France!!!!!

art7sayan
07-19-2002, 09:05 AM
Ok man, I will give you this as soon as I can but now I'm so busy...


C U! :wavey:

LostSoul¹13
07-19-2002, 09:07 AM
its all good i'm up to my ears in homework also so no rush when you can u can i wana spent time on it. But ya nice remake. Were do you work at?

Neil
07-19-2002, 03:49 PM
Not trying to start a fight, but i could probably start a new thread on this topic.. but anywho...

After looking at the new drawing you gave him, it just reinforced what i've been thinking. Too many people are drawing the same body structures. The comic style of broad shoulders and very defined muscles. It looks cool, but i don't think it should be applied to everything. I jsut don't think that a character with a lightbulb on his head (IE: Fragile person) would be ripped and strong.

I would just like to see the style changed up some more. And this doesn't apply to the cartoony girls that i see on here.

art7sayan
07-19-2002, 04:02 PM
Yes Neil you're right, if you think so I will change his body as soon as I can too...this one was the first thing coming into my mind 'coz it was a very quick sketch to take the flavor and 'coz LostSoul13 said that it will be a "scary game" and not so funny to make a "toon"...

Psycho Ken
07-19-2002, 04:50 PM
By the way~is a horror more mature game or?
(my hands gettin itchy~~ke ke ke ke~~~)
Ken.02

LostSoul¹13
07-19-2002, 05:27 PM
Hey All.
May I. I see the point Neil is trying to make. Even looking at my first description of the character, Dady doesn wont him anymore cause he build himself a new toy. I can steel work with Art7's character just have to textured differently some rust and scratches, dints and he will be rady to go. And like i said before Art7's stuf is toooooo kick ass. I just dont see it as game material let me refrase that as low poly material. I rather take his character and build him with alot of details with nice new shiny tecstures.
Also Neil thats the way art7sayan draws thats his style all his characters are beefed up and ready to kick some ass. Wich most of us enjoy. We all love action, explosions and fights. I'm not saying you are wrong yes there are alot of character with strong phisic out there. But people draw what they enjoy and love.
*****
Ken ya i was thinking of a scary game Boooooooo!!!!!! --->AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
Too bad its not going to appear on shelvs anytime soon lol.
******
piece and love

jeroentje
07-19-2002, 06:24 PM
Ehm... Carl Barks (you know, that guy that made Donald Duck famous, when he worked for Disney Studios?) made this character back in the 1950's as a companion for Donald Duck's inventor friend...

No offence, but ehm... not a very original idea IMHO.
jeroentje

LostSoul¹13
07-19-2002, 06:30 PM
Oh dang man i never new about this one. Dang there gows my original idea DOH DOH.

art7sayan
07-19-2002, 06:34 PM
Yes LostSoul13, I knew it too but if we add some details on it or maybe if we change the form of the lightbulb it will be more original...I will try to work on it more, don't worry!! lol :thumbsup:

LostSoul¹13
07-19-2002, 06:44 PM
Well bulb no bulm i was thinking more of a dismembared moneken lool more plastic then straight tubes I guess i can go more modern on the light bulb like the new philips ones nerow and long. Well what can i say all the things that we have now were already invented by someone else some time ego same goes for the music.

jeroentje
07-19-2002, 07:44 PM
LOL Sorry man... But you don't want to know how may times that has happened to me ;)

I don't know if this one will fit into you scenario, but I just had this idea.
It is just a big and a small bulb put together, with the wires for legs. Very simple. Maybe make him 6-legged instead of eight for a real spider (you know, 3 wires a bulb...).

Here's my 2 minute sketch...
See for yourself what you do with it ;)
cheers, jeroentje :beer:

LostSoul¹13
07-19-2002, 07:48 PM
Looks cool I'll model it 2night. So its a spider or a fly just ad wings lol and Bzzzzzzzzzzz.
Oh and were in the hell you found that image. i never saw that guy in any cartoons. Did they ever used him? or he didnt pass go?

jeroentje
07-19-2002, 07:55 PM
Yeah okay, I would love to see that.
Ehm.. you have to know for yourself but if I may give one last suggestion? If you decide to give him wings and make him a fly or something, don't add wings of a real fly, but construct it out of rubbish. Like a big paperclip wit a post it memo folded around it for a wing, or something like that. Follow the logics of the character, if you know what I mean ;)

cheers again, jeroentje

jeroentje
07-19-2002, 08:07 PM
Sorry, didn't see the question in the edit.
Found him by google.com search "lampje donald duck" on a Dutch fan-page. (He's called "lampje" in Dutch ;) )

Here's the guy's homepage. Not all together please, he'll be in for a surprise then haha LOL
http://home.wxs.nl/~a.kuijk/lampje.htm

alchoi
07-19-2002, 08:40 PM
Hehehehe ....

Here's my quick little spin on it ...

;)

LostSoul¹13
07-19-2002, 08:44 PM
Thanks al_choi. Yes im steel doing a humanoid. looks nice thanks

Kirt
07-19-2002, 10:12 PM
I believe that the Barks character was "Lampie" in English. I faintly remember this one too. A little before my time ... but I had some reprints of Scrooge McDuck when I was a kid.

I was going to put in my own sketches on this thread ... but haven't had time to do any. :(

LostSoul¹13
07-19-2002, 11:37 PM
its going to be up for a long time so no time constraints lol.

Psycho Ken
07-20-2002, 05:59 AM
Here's one of my rough sketch~hope it helps~;)
Maybe i'll proceed the neat one when i'm free~:shrug:
Ken.02

LostSoul¹13
07-20-2002, 06:17 AM
You go Ken. Nice and scary. Ty Can you give me the close up of the chest area?

art7sayan
07-20-2002, 06:29 AM
Yeah!!! Great one Ken, I dig it a lot!!! :buttrock:

Psycho Ken
07-20-2002, 06:49 AM
Here comes the neat one~:buttrock:

Psycho Ken
07-20-2002, 06:51 AM
And here's a ZoOm In body parts~!
:scream: :beer:
Artsayan:Thanks man~! yours also good~!!
Ken.02:thumbsup:

LostSoul¹13
07-20-2002, 06:57 AM
Nice. I'm spechless. :thumbsup: :buttrock: OK guys you puting too much presure on me lol Now i have to aborb it all And come up with a front and side for modeling lol.

Psycho Ken
07-20-2002, 07:02 AM
Lostsoul:Good start~! May The Force Be With You!!:thumbsup:
Ken.02

LostSoul¹13
07-20-2002, 07:06 AM
Is that a helmet on his head or you steel usig the bolb? Love the stiches.

Psycho Ken
07-20-2002, 07:11 AM
Errmmm....maybe is steel a bolb~just in different shape~
or maybe can be anythings else~?:shrug:
(bolb,fuse,tin can etc) ke ke ke~~~depends on u~
:thumbsup: :beer:
Ken.02

art7sayan
07-20-2002, 07:21 AM
Pretty good Ken!

LostSoul, I think that you can ask to Ken to do the front and the side sketch because he got a good flavor on this one (...and because I'm really busy and I can't help now :cry: )
But Ken is really good so "may the force be with you guys!!"
:xtreme:

LostSoul¹13
07-20-2002, 07:23 AM
Hey jeroentje Got your spider almost finished just have to figure out how in the world i have to make the lght bulbs glow.

Psycho Ken
07-20-2002, 07:25 AM
Aiks.....me afraid i also dun hav da time....(accept "rest time")
i also quite bz for my comics....:cry: (i'm cryin too)
If really i got plenty of freetime,maybe i can help u Lostsoul....
Artsayan:Aiks.......let's busy together.....u jump,i jump.....
Ken.02 :scream:

LostSoul¹13
07-20-2002, 07:27 AM
So how about it Ken will you do me this BIg favor of drawing me the side and front?? plplplpl cause i know i will F it up somehow. If your bussy i understand i'll do my best on it. But if you can i will greatly apretiated.

art7sayan
07-20-2002, 07:31 AM
...lol here i jump Ken :bounce: !

But if I got a lil' time, I will add another character for you lostSoul with front, back & Side view ;)

Psycho Ken
07-20-2002, 07:32 AM
Yah....i'll help u
u'll see ur "front side view" by tomolo~:thumbsup:
Ken.02

Psycho Ken
07-20-2002, 07:34 AM
He he he he he comes the NEW "3 musketeers"~~!!
:beer:
Lostsoul: u owe artsayan a tons of beers~!! ke ke ke
Ken.02

art7sayan
07-20-2002, 07:37 AM
lol I prefer orange juice if you don't mind! lol :D

LostSoul¹13
07-20-2002, 07:40 AM
hey the next time I'm in france Nous alons boir de bier.:beer:
I think thats how you spell it But beer it is. Or orange juice and Vodka. hell ya

art7sayan
07-20-2002, 07:42 AM
Pas de probleme! :beer:

LostSoul¹13
07-20-2002, 07:47 AM
Thanks Ken. I'll do my best on it. I gues i would have to send you guys a couple of butles of Beer. Lol or if you ever in Atlanta well you know you will have the hoock up lol.

jeroentje
07-20-2002, 10:21 AM
Originally posted by LostSoul¹13
Hey jeroentje Got your spider almost finished just have to figure out how in the world i have to make the light bulbs glow.

LOL! Looks more like a big ant IMHO ;) But hey, it is very, very cool! :buttrock:
Howabout a whole army of 'em? Like in that Rammstein video haha :)

cheers, jeroentje

Psycho Ken
07-20-2002, 11:02 AM
Here's some rough sketch of his views
maybe i'll do the neat 1 when i've free times~ :lightbulb
Ken.02

Psycho Ken
07-20-2002, 11:04 AM
here's one of my version~ke ke ke
jz a rough sketch~anyway...hav a look~
;)
Ken.02

Psycho Ken
07-20-2002, 11:05 AM
here's the Zoom in~
Ken.02;)

LostSoul¹13
07-20-2002, 06:02 PM
Thanks Ken. I'll get on it as soon as i can. The zombie one looks cool

Psycho Ken
07-20-2002, 08:03 PM
I'll draw the neat 1 later~
u'll see it tomolo~;)
or you wanna try it ursef?
Ken.02:)

LostSoul¹13
07-21-2002, 05:36 AM
I got the front and side from the one you gave me it's a lil not aligned but its fine i'll go around it. Just need the botomn part. Other wise i would have to put him in a weel chair lol.

Soeren Nielsen
07-21-2002, 10:34 AM
Nice drawings, I like em alot :)
LostSoul how about maybe braking the lightbulb, BUT still have it glowing, I know its not possible in the real world, but this isnt the real worl, and it adds to the freakyness :)

LostSoul¹13
07-22-2002, 03:04 AM
Interesting indea Nielsen. I'll try it when the model will be done. thanks for teh sugjestion.

Psycho Ken
07-22-2002, 02:58 PM
Here's the backview and someothers view~
hmm....~~aiks......:shrug:
Ken.02:scream:

LostSoul¹13
07-23-2002, 08:30 AM
Hell all. I'm back lol. I would like to post my WIP for Kent's drawings I'm steel tweeking the cage but i think its coming out nicelly:bounce: . Me happy. The one thing i dont know how pomped should i make him or how many muscle groups should i develop on him. Would pectoralis be enough or should i ad more?
Sugjestions....
Ok here it is.

LostSoul¹13
07-23-2002, 08:34 AM
one more view.. :wavey:

Psycho Ken
07-23-2002, 02:47 PM
The body part looks cool to me~nice one!:thumbsup:
hmmm abt the muscle......aiks....i'm oustation till this Sat,there's no scanner at my fren place.......aiks....
anyway keep on workin! and i'll see wat can i help when i get back~;)
Ken.02

Soeren Nielsen
07-23-2002, 05:41 PM
I think the chest should be a bit bigger, and more soft, only critique I have :)

Gamoron
07-23-2002, 06:34 PM
Looks like my guy kind of. The light head and all. I made an animated short with him titled HEAD. It'll be on HOLLYWOOD.COM next month.

Psycho Ken
07-24-2002, 04:45 PM
gamoron:Nice one~:thumbsup:
Lostsoul:so how's the "body parts" goin?
Ken.02

LostSoul¹13
07-24-2002, 11:56 PM
Slowly lol. Have too much stuff to do for school didnt had a chance to work on it soo far. I prob do some work on it 2night.

Psycho Ken
07-28-2002, 06:30 PM
So~how's it goin?
when ya gonna post it~?
Ken.02:D

LostSoul¹13
07-30-2002, 04:51 AM
hey all working on it right now will post 2night. :thumbsup:

LostSoul¹13
07-30-2002, 07:26 AM
like promised ;). Tweeked chest and tryed adding the brain compartment. The uniformity in the inside compartment was a pure axident forgot to select those fases when was making the holow area but i thinks it looks better like that. Like my drawing teacher would say Happy accidents lol. I'm going to work on the transition between the brain and the body more cause i dont really like the way its turning out looks too smooth maybee put some indentetions in that area Hmm kinda good idea lol Well ok here are some picks i rendered about 5 or so just diff angles i'll post the ones from the back for now i didn't doo much on the chest but never mind here they are :beer: cheers

LostSoul¹13
07-30-2002, 07:29 AM
You know what i would have to scratch all of that you have it looking dif on your second detailed views. This one too big. changes on the way. Here a pick from a dif angle of the bad one.

LostSoul¹13
07-30-2002, 08:23 AM
OK I rescaled the compartment and changed the hoses to more rounded. Havent aded the details like i said in the previous post will steel have to do that on the one that You guys gona pick? So are we gona make him smart or ....... Big brain or small lol. Ok peace.

LostSoul¹13
08-02-2002, 08:59 AM
One more week flue by dang its going fast. I had time to work on it :). Here how far i got. OH yea Ken were is the imput man ??????
:surprised

Psycho Ken
08-07-2002, 05:03 PM
Aiks~!sorry for reply late~!! i jz back from H.K~~~
well nice job~!! so wat can i do for u?
~~:beer:
Ken.02

LostSoul¹13
08-07-2002, 05:15 PM
SUP Ken. How u been man? How's H.K.? Can you give me a bigger drawing of arms Front and side the one that you gave me is too small it looks pixeleted when i bring it in Max :( That would be it for now. Ty again.

Psycho Ken
08-14-2002, 07:00 PM
Ahhhh~!! Finally really get back to work~!!these few weeks really bz~!! now finally "smooth" a lil'~
well i'll help u do it at this Sat~!
Ken.02:thumbsup:

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