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rsmith3d
01-30-2002, 12:20 PM
Hi all. Been lurking for awhile, checking out the excellent work. Here is what I've got so far. Hopefully I'll get it near completion by thursday.

Kudos to all, very inspiring work.
Richard Smith




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ACFred
01-30-2002, 02:03 PM
Hi Richard.

That's a nice model you have going there. That face is really well developed.
The body shape looks good, but I think it needs as much thought put into it as the face did. While the body has a nice human shape to it, it seems to be on a different evolutionary path than the face.

I'm not sure what your guy's story or history is, but think of making his body better fit that story. It doesn't have to be a radical difference, just something different than the generally shaped body you have.


Like I said, it all looks to be modeled well and I really dig the face. Just consider the body a bit more.

Take a look at your models hands as well. The fingers and the thumb look a bit off.

That's it.

Good luck!

Alec

rsmith3d
01-30-2002, 11:13 PM
Thanks for the comments. Yeah, I've spent most of the time on the head so far. I'm trying to work my way down. I'm going to add areas of asymetry at the end.

Richard Smith

jimpajammer
01-30-2002, 11:56 PM
he looks very aquatic.. have you considered adding webbs between his fingers "swimskin"? it could be part of the glove..

he looks very wet and porcelain like.

nice work!

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