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Meshuggah
05-18-2004, 03:45 AM
Pär Olofsson has entered the Machineflesh 2D Challenge.

Meshuggah
05-18-2004, 03:45 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084282634_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084282634_large.jpg)

the first concepts for the "Waste Worm Willie". A larva blown up a couple of sizes, attached to mechanical legs and an artificial nervous system witch allows it to be controlled from a distance. It´s simply a living garbage truck with a super appetite!

Meshuggah
05-18-2004, 03:45 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084283623_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084283623_large.jpg)

concept of the mechanical parts..

Meshuggah
05-18-2004, 03:45 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084283895_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084283895_large.jpg)

...the body attached to the legs.

Meshuggah
05-18-2004, 03:45 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084288813_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084288813_large.jpg)

The public was disgusted when Waste Worm Willie was put into service. The worms (larvas) patrolled the streets and ate everything it´s AI considered to be garbage. When the manufacturers got the negativ reactions from the public they started a massive pr-campaign that would help the worms to be more accepted as public servants. Of course it didn´t take long before the worms had to be moved to industrial areas and other secluded places.

Meshuggah
05-18-2004, 03:45 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084347180_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084347180_large.jpg)

I worked like an animal last night... Need some feedback please

Meshuggah
05-18-2004, 03:45 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084347319_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084347319_large.jpg)

first coloring

Meshuggah
05-18-2004, 03:45 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084347409_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084347409_large.jpg)

still a little grey and lifeless

Meshuggah
05-18-2004, 03:45 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084347730_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084347730_large.jpg)

a couple of hours later the colors started to emerge. Would like some comments before I proceed.

Meshuggah
05-18-2004, 03:45 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084350462_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084350462_large.jpg)

Reply to "duddlebug"
<br>
<br>I did put a billboard in the back but as you said, the logo needs a lot of work. The problem is I don´t know how to make it cute without overdoing it.
<br>

Meshuggah
05-18-2004, 03:45 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084362148_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084362148_large.jpg)

here´s a more transparent version...

Meshuggah
05-18-2004, 03:45 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084453191_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1084453191_large.jpg)

A little more transparent and a small implant near the "head". The implant works as a conection between the radio receiver and the artificial nervous system.

koh
05-18-2004, 06:59 AM
I really like your painting and concept. Especially I like the legs.
My personal opinion, the black head seem to be little empty compare to all the other elements in your painting. Sutle reflection or LED showing from inside maight help.
Anyway I just want to say my opinion because this forum is all about that.

Nice work:bowdown:

Riddick
05-24-2004, 11:14 AM
Man!
I 'm really surprise that there is no more replies...
You have made a great work!!
Keep this way!:thumbsup:

Meshuggah
05-24-2004, 11:28 AM
Thanks to the nice hackers all my replies has been erased!
But now I´m back in business baby

artjunkie
05-24-2004, 02:08 PM
Wow, really awesome work... you have a great style and I love the mood of this concept. :bowdown:

I am constantly amazed by the level of talent exhibited on this forum... I am humbled to compete among such awesome artists. Very inspiring. Keep it up! :buttrock:

Here's my machineflesh thread if you're interested:
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?threadid=140198


Good luck in the contest!

:beer:

duddlebug
05-25-2004, 09:34 AM
Hey... it's good to see your work back up!! Those darned hackers need to get themselves a more productive hobby...

Didn't spot that billboard when i fisrt looked!! Nice and integrated into the composition... is it going to be spotlit and a little bit more colourful than it's surroundings when you get the image done...?

The image is coming on really well!! The textures of the different surfaces are really developing with each update...

nice one...

danne_n
05-25-2004, 02:04 PM
Nice work!
Cool style, good choice of colors too!
The transparancy works really nice!
I'ts hard to tell how big it is though, maybe some object near the worm as reference would do it? something with familiar measures!

sketchfiend
05-25-2004, 02:07 PM
Truely sickening, i love it. Im sorry i havent seen your image before, i love those mechaincal hooks at the bottom of the head. The worm thing reminds me of the HUGE! grubs we have here in australia, they live in tree bark in the bush, and supposedly (i havent done it myself) but you can eat them, its meant to be some sort of a survival thing if you ever get stuck out there...
But after seeing your image im sure it would be enough for anyone whos ever eaten one feel queasy. Great stuff:thumbsup: :D

The more transparrent flesh makes it look much more jelly like and softer, a lot more realistic. One thing that im having trouble with is the scale of the creature, alot of the buildings and other stuff is off in the background but there doesnt seem to be anything noticable to compare it to, just a thought.:D :thumbsup:

Meshuggah
05-27-2004, 09:29 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1085646548_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1085646548_large.jpg)

added two maintenance guys but they kind of look like tourists...

Russo
05-27-2004, 09:35 AM
cool! it´s weird! it´s strange! it looks convincent! I like it!

keep em coming!

cheers! :scream:

r3studios
05-27-2004, 01:58 PM
great concept and stuff! i like the idea!

maybe get rid of the huge eye and do it like the brain bug from starship troopers.

found no better image, sorry.

http://www.trooperpx.com/VidMods/HalfLife/brainbug.jpg

Meshuggah
05-27-2004, 02:17 PM
actually it´s not an eye, its´the head. The eyes are there somewhere, maybe I should make them more visible?

MustardWash
05-27-2004, 06:44 PM
This is a great pic!!! Wish I had come across this post awhile ago.

You are right about the maintenance guys... they dont seem like they are workers or maintaining anything, more like they are browsing. Maybe if they had some visible tools or something?

About the head, it does look like one big eye right now and not so much like a head, BUT I like it better as a big eye. Gives it more of an alien / insectile feel to the worm. I say keep it how it is. KOH suggested having a subtle reflection or LED lights on the surface, which I think would look good.

Keep up the good work man, :bounce: Im lovin' how this picture is evolving. I'll be subscribing to this thread. :thumbsup:

E.T
05-27-2004, 07:44 PM
Nice work! skitsnyggt

Get some wires between the maintenanceguys and the bug.

Or at least some kind of connection otherwise they WILL look like tourists. Albeit nicelooking ones :)

Meshuggah
05-28-2004, 11:35 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1085740514_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1085740514_large.jpg)

I have two problems, the "tourists" and a head that looks like an eye. Gonna deal with the head first..

Luter
05-28-2004, 01:44 PM
Hoho!!! It's a very good work man ! I like it!
:)
Keep up!

taiji
05-28-2004, 05:06 PM
It's Ugly ! Baaaah ! I like it !

How did you guy go down such a track.
It's a thing of it's own kind.

Please don't make it look like Star ship trooper's brain bug.
Don't make it look like anything we've seen before.
Just make it look like what it is : something we've never seen before.

Keep up the good work.

seyn
05-28-2004, 08:24 PM
really cool work!:drool:

Meshuggah
05-30-2004, 12:15 AM
Originally posted by taiji

Please don't make it look like Star ship troopers brain bug.


No way it´s gonna be a Star Ship Trooper´s brain bug, why do something that´s already been done? That´s the whole point of this challenge...to make something original.
( even though I love Star Ship Troopers )

MrFreeman
05-31-2004, 12:48 AM
Loved the Free waste Worm Willie campaign....interesting concept...

I really like your latest WIP stuff and look forward to seeing the finished article.

I think you are right in that the workmen look like tourists, but they do add to the sense of scale.

Great detail-must have taken a while to get to this stage...

:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

lulaassassina
05-31-2004, 01:02 AM
:eek: :eek: :eek:
speachless...

Meshuggah
06-04-2004, 03:54 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1086360871_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1086360871_large.jpg)

Moved the "tourists" a.k.a Maintenance guys closer to Willie. They dont seem to work that hard though...
( Note to future generations: Beware! Maintenance guys of tomorrow are lazy! )

flyingP
06-04-2004, 07:17 PM
yep still one of my favourites, I love those eye variations you did, seem to have missed that before :thumbsup:

Luter
06-04-2004, 08:16 PM
brrrrrrrrrrr..........but I like that, it's a good vision. Great texture on the worm..I like how machine is implanted......
brrrrrrrrrrrrr...pshhhhhhh...pshhhhhh


..................................................:wavey: .........................................

EmpY
06-04-2004, 09:51 PM
Oh boy this is fantastic!!!
Beautiful tones, great atmosphere,
and weird, awesome concept!!!:thumbsup:

:applause:

AirbORn
06-05-2004, 05:42 AM
Beautiful colours, I love the detail, lighting, mood, subject matter, and overall unity in your piece. My mouth is watering with anticipation my friend. :thumbsup:

fishermanDavis
06-05-2004, 06:31 AM
The iridescence on the surface of the creature is very nice - I actually really liked the eye in the bottom left of the 4 pictures! It makes it look somehow sympathetic rather than just alien. Love the green ichor!

sun_olya
06-05-2004, 07:45 AM
Originally posted by Meshuggah
Moved the "tourists" a.k.a Maintenance guys closer to Willie. They don't seem to work that hard though...
( Note to future generations: Beware! Maintenance guys of tomorrow are lazy! )

Maybe you should put both hands of the right guy up into the air, or maybe there should be some kind of hatch open with worm's internal details available for them to "maintain" ?

Newke
06-05-2004, 11:31 AM
Wow, didn't see your work sooner, that 's a very good job, and a great and original idea !
I love the colors too :thumbsup:

neandertal
06-11-2004, 03:46 PM
Disgustingly nice ! I just love it ! The brillance on the flesh is terrible ! :bowdown:

Meshuggah
06-15-2004, 02:08 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1087304892_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1087304892_large.jpg)

Finally they are working...

techart
06-15-2004, 02:48 PM
nice work man..awesome

neble
06-16-2004, 06:18 AM
really interesting image. I especially like the organic body above, nice use of colors.

Meshuggah
06-16-2004, 02:41 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1087393281_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1087393281_large.jpg)

guess Im done soon, some last comments would be helpful...

SideAche
06-16-2004, 03:39 PM
Really nice work!:thumbsup:

galaxian
06-16-2004, 03:56 PM
What else can I say but
Egg-selent.
Eeegg-selent.
:applause:

shivacola
06-17-2004, 12:04 PM
oldskoooool !!!! great , looks like old sci-fi illustrations !
Great ! :applause: :beer:

Meshuggah
06-17-2004, 02:01 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1087477301_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1087477301_large.jpg)

final coloring...

beta-studios
06-17-2004, 10:17 PM
This is one of the best peices I saw!
Great Job!

Squibbit
06-17-2004, 10:29 PM
truly , so , Meshuggah , great job !

only you sort of finished that pic in a day ... not counting the
two people ... and it was poster like.

it's like you need not put so much time in your pics unless you
really , I mean Really get into details , yes ?

excellent work , dude !

(except I saw the worm as way bigger ... those dudes would be
the size of their boots as I saw it )

Meshuggah
06-18-2004, 09:05 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1087545943_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3550/3550_1087545943_large.jpg)

well this was fun..

Good luck everybody!!!

eska
06-19-2004, 07:33 AM
Excellent!

newone
06-20-2004, 11:48 AM
Very good work! I like it!:thumbsup:

MrFreeman
06-20-2004, 01:14 PM
:drool: A fine piece of work Meshuggah....really worth waiting for...

Glad to see you managed to intergrate the two guys in space suits so they are more part of the scene. And the worm doesn't look like it has a big eye now....one of the best...amazing work...

Good luck in the next stage and see you in the next challenge :applause: :applause: :thumbsup:

Skywatcher
06-24-2004, 11:04 AM
I think this is the best 2D entry I saw so far.Great work!!!
Good luck in the voting.http://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon13.gif


My challenge:

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/machineflesh/image.php?entry_id=14028

Shinwa
07-14-2004, 12:17 AM
He's SOOO CUTE!!! We need to start implementing him soon, you know? GREAT idea, and what a wonderful image. You did a great job illustrating your concept, everything from the use of the men in the suits to the toxic green atmosphere to the buildings in the back. Great Work, and Good luck!:applause:

Keem
07-16-2004, 08:40 PM
Hi
good Job , sorry i dont know how to read ur name, anyway

I liked the way u Built the Structure of this worm ..it seems ur work come from a deep understanding to nature and mashines and Specially the LINK ..
but the final worm is more to a robot than a worm , i would prefer that u stick to the worm in the 1st sketch , it really Gives a perfect feeling ..

Good Luck

Slav
07-17-2004, 05:13 PM
hi Meshuggah,

i have looked at year image and i must say its really great ... like most of the work on here the result is very nice. i wish you the best of luck.

and if you would like come by and have a look at my thread :) let me know what you think.

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