Neighborhood house

[samuraislayer]

i cant believe you didnt get any replies yet... very nice render

one thing tho... the proportions of the building seem a little bit off, when comparing the doors on the right of the building to the windows... it kinda lacks a sense of scale or depth... one of the two

very nice tho :)

-SS

[Spud]

very nice man ,great textures

[johan21]

great job, i like the colour scheme

couple crits

1. the chimney on the left is the weakest link. its a box. at the very least you should chamfer the vertical edges and add a bit of noise to the mesh. if you havent used a reference for this, you might want to take a look at some real chimneys.

2. the corners of the central building, with those long white vertical bits - same problem as the chimney. smooth the sharp edges. if they were ever really built that sharp, they'd have chipped, so maybe you could add these too. same goes for that razor sharp horizontal top edge.

3. it looks like you just cheated and used your brick texture map on the stairs :) these would either just be plain concrete (most likely) or if they were tiled, the tiles wouldn't look like brick - they'd match and be flush with each of the steps.

hope this helps

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