CGTalk - Demon babe WIP

pswitzer

01-30-2002, 09:41 AM

This is a character I've dug out of the closet to fix up. I realize where some of the problems lie, but I'm really not at the point of being satisfied. Something is buggin' and I can't get to the bottom of it.

The boobs will be moved closer together and I realize that some things sink into the mesh from the back view. That'll be delt with.

Crits? I really could use them at this point. Point of the character is to be to an extent cartoony (hair is temp though), seductive and evil.

http://liquid2k.com/patswitzer/succubus2.jpg
and
http://liquid2k.com/patswitzer/succubus1.jpg

Forgive the poor image quality.

Bug_Eyed_Earl

01-30-2002, 11:04 AM

Let me start off saying that I really like your style. She looks really cool. I do have a few suggestions though (which is why you put her up - right ;-)).

I think her breasts are a little large for her current frame - and while you could simply scale them down - we both know that would be about the WORST thing you could ever do ;-). hehehe. Seriously - I think her hips need to be fuller - and more anatomically correct. At the moment I would have trouble telling you where her pelvis is, or where her leg muscles connect at the top - or where her butt-cheeks end and her back/legs start. It may seem silly - but it does make a ton of difference. Go look at www.gremlins.com/azimuth_design

His characters are FAR more muscular than yours is - so its not the perfect reference, but this exaggeration could help with your anatomy stuff. :).

I love the boots.

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