Machineflesh 3D Challenge Entry: ali rahimi shahmirzadi

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

Hi everyone
My preview id was (OBITUARY) but after the hackers attack i couldent login with that id, and my entire entery page was gone, and nobody answer my question to what to do.
So i decision to enter again to machineflesh with my old id, and upload the images again. I also pasted the othere user post reply before that attack as it was before.
I am starting again. I hope there was no problem with the rule. as i dont have any othere choice, and i cant wait to see that maybe my problem is solved. I have a lots of update and wip must go on.
:hmm:

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

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Batrachian final minute

Location: Another planet
In a glass house base, a few creatures are living. Half of their body is robot and, the other half is alive.
Their body consists of metal, bone and flesh. Inside of the glass house there is air, ouside of it there is no air.
The creatures need oxygen to survive. They are also equiped with an reserve oxygen mechanism
(oxygen battery, OB) for the outside environment. The OB, when emptied, should be charged again.
Inside the glass house, OB is in the off position, when creature go to the outside that there is no air, OBs start to work.

Due to some reasons, like collision of a meteor, the barrier of the glass house cracks and,gradually, air escapes to the outer space.
Soon, the creatures will depend only on their OBs which contains a limited amount of oxygen.
Gradually, the OBs get empty and many of the creatures die.
Only a few of them remain alive, they should also die soon.
To be alive for a few more minutes,they start to struggle with each other in order to catch the OBs of other ones.
A struggle to survive a little more.
I try to show these last few minutes which is full of stress and fear in a single shot.
I hope to be on time.

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

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Final sketch

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1084698404_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1084698404_large.jpg)

Modeling update #1

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

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BartokDesign

The draw looks very interesting .
bizarre
pain denies the soul
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kmest

it looks intresting.go for it.
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JPCohet

Thanks OBITUARY for visiting my thread.
Good sketch. The remaining time is short; good luck.
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ila_solomon

:-) Hi ali, interesting concept, as always! ... I can't wait to see your ideas in 3D :-D . I wish you luck. rock on man.
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[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

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Modeling update #2

[pigwater]

hey ali .. good days work ya got here .. like the progress and the pics ... very gestural sketches and anxious to see if you carry that into your piece

have fun and keep em comin :beer:

EDIT : i think i missed something .. was the posted earlier and it got lost in the hack ?? .. anyways good stuff

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

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Powell

nice start
How are you rendering those wireframes in MentalRay??
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OBITUARY

hi .thank you all for your support
Powell . its a trick .there are many way for this kind of wire frame rendering. in maya first i set the uv map to Auto progection then in take a snapshot in uv texture editor its depending on a details of your model set the size .and then you can decreas or decrease the Diameter ot the lines and use this as the alpha channel . dont forget to use the raytrace shadow.
the othere way in mental ray is to use the contour shader, but its looks post process and also i cant render the faces in quadric with contour shader all faces shown as a triangle . can anyone solve my problem ?

i have the another problem .how can i delete on of my wip upload images ?
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[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

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Modeling update #3

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1084701611_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1084701611_large.jpg)

Modeling update #4

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

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xDreamer

u rocks
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-REZA-

Nice & Fast start !
Wish you the best

Pirooz bashi
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[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

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Modeling update #5

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1084702090_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1084702090_large.jpg)

Modeling update #6

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

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Lemog

Whaouwww... exceptionnel Wip man

I like a lot the concept and the look... good work and terribly original
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harnelbe

Not posted yet a message about your entry !

Great entry you have done, you have an other fan ! I visited your website, great visit in borad of a biped Robot !! lol
I like a lot your avatar !
Where can i see the orinal CG you have used for ? I like a lot the render !

The concept you are woking on, let me imagine a great mood !!
i like it a lot ! !!
Cu soon !

I stay tune about your next updates !
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imscifi

wow! Dude... that's awesome! Nice modeling... I can't wait to see where you head with this! Great job so far!

excellente!
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essencedesign

I have to say I love the look of your creation...very ..um .."giant bionic insect dragon"..if there is such a category,,,,if not i guess you just made it....
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thanks a lot. i hope
what you see is the low poly. right now i am working on a bones and character setup. as i want this thing realy works not just a sculpt. and after that i am going to strat muscle modeling and then some skin.

harnelbe - this are the links that you can see my avatar character
see u soon

http://www.ali-rahimi.net/temp-htm/Untitled-1.htm
http://www.ali-rahimi.net/temp-htm/Untitled-2.htm
http://www.ali-rahimi.net/temp-htm/Untitled-3.htm
http://www.ali-rahimi.net/temp-htm/Untitled-4.htm
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this was the reply with my preview id (OBITUARY), before hackers attack
aftere this are with my new id (ali-rahimi-3d)
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[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

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Modeling update #7

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1084707797_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1084707797_large.jpg)

Modeling update #8

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1084708006_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1084708006_large.jpg)

Modeling update #9

[SergioSantos]

amazing concept!!!

i love this character, very impressive,
position... design...

this images inspire me!!!

very good work with the model, let we see your textures!

[Ionized]

Excellent character design. I love it.

Hope to see some more flesh components in the final piece, but a great start!!

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

thanks
this are some lowpoly of the head. every muscle is moving. i am working on it

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1084822983_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1084822983_large.jpg)

Modeling update #10

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1084823169_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1084823169_large.jpg)

Modeling update #11

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1084833742_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1084833742_large.jpg)

Modeling update #12

[redwing77418]

I like it,very nice~

[Pyke]

Wow! Fantastic modeling! It reminds me very much of 'origami'. You have a VERY uniquie style....like these creatures are constructed out of very complex layers of thin materials....paper like.

Hard to explain! Buit EXTREAMLY cool non-the less.

[skello]

Hey nice to see you entered!!...i like your stuff!....awesome planning as always.
BTW. never got to see that wormlike character you were working on a couple of years ago...let us know when your gallery is up so i can check it out

[briancole]

great entry! i really like the skeletal feel to your modeling. sorry 'bout the hackers...but it looks like you're back on track..

the 'dirtiness' of your renderings give the images a great feel, i'm sure we'll see some of that in your final image. can you give tips on how you accomplished that?

what software are you using?

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

thank you all for your suport

(skello) i am glad that you still remember that work :p

(bigfatclown) the 'dirtiness' of the images is a simple bitmap mask in photoshop, and i use (maya 6).

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

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this are some new update of the bottom chap of the character whit no muscle yet

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1085189056_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1085189056_large.jpg)

Modeling update #14

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1085196279_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1085196279_large.jpg)

Modeling update #15

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1085196891_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1085196891_large.jpg)

Modeling update #16

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1085197134_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/5/3582/3582_1085197134_large.jpg)

Modeling update #17

[claudiojordao]

A simple "WOW" is not enough Tali_rahimi_3d... I can't wait to see the final image.

[RezaMisaghi]

Hey ... You Rock !

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

[xDreamer]

Wow ! It's Amazing Ali ...
I found a great solution for Muscle Binding ... ;)
I'll tell u later .


:thumbsup:

[Kanga]

ali_rahimi_3d

Fabulous graphic and 3d design, wonderfull approach, should be in a gallery.

Great stuff :thumbsup:
Greetings Kanga

[DimitrisLiatsos]

yes ..it's a beauty...especially in that X-ray shading.....:bounce: :bounce:

[EmpY]

Beautiful work here!!:thumbsup:
Waiting for more.

[Ionized]

Fantastic work! No crits!!

I absolutely love the x-ray scans you have done, they are just too cool and the modelling of the jawbone in itself is very stylised and solid:thumbsup:

It looks like the jaw splits in half with the tusks folding back underneath it?? I love stuff that transforms like that... it's great to see you give it this attention to detail

I hope you can get the whole creature done in time for the deadline to this level of quality. Great stuff.:wip:

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

thank you all
some new update of the head -lowpoly. iam working on the muscle and wire right now.

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

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Modeling update #18

[ali-rahimi-shahmirzadi]

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Modeling update #19

[ilasolomon]

:thumbsup: :applause: :beer:

[Sandpiper]

Omigosh. That's friggin sweet lookin. I look that last shot you posted. Very intimidating!

I like the look of the blue texturing/lighting on the metal of update #15.

Is texturing coming soon? :)

[Cartesius]

Oh my... Nothing to say but ---> :applause: :applause:

/Anders

[vintagetone]

Increadible.... this thing looks like it will come alive and walk down the street (hope I'm not on that street when it does!).:eek:

[kmest]

:applause: :thumbsup: :buttrock: :beer:

[arLutiK]

very nice work. :thumbsup:

[skello]

update!!:bounce:

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