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07-15-2002, 11:30 PM
Guys this is MY work......:)
Monk. Tell me what is good....and what is bad in picture....
07-15-2002, 11:42 PM
hmmm....i'm wondering what there should be shown to us?
all i can say is ... it's very dark, but a very cool very dark image!
07-16-2002, 12:02 AM
Nice clothe's texture and cool atmosphere but, where is the monk?, I can't see his face. It would be nice to see the wireframe.
Sorry for my English.
07-16-2002, 01:05 AM
hehehe.....The picture will lose the bewitching effect if the person will be visible.....:shame:
07-16-2002, 01:46 AM
For all we know that could be Richard Simmons. At least make his face a little bit visible. Cool image nontheless.
07-16-2002, 01:56 AM
make his nose mouth and chin a little lighter, like the Emperor from my favorite movie series of all time!!!!!!
and NO, i'm not talking about Big Trouble in Little China.
07-16-2002, 02:06 AM
good....ok i'll try in future post update picture.....
by the way ...what you think about background????
07-16-2002, 05:44 AM
The background is very "Gigeresque" -If you know what I'm talking about.
i think you should make it more like your sketch show some features but hide most of the face with shadow. it kinda looks like you cheaped out now. colours & textures are cool.
07-17-2002, 12:28 AM
hm......there is wireframe......
head is not done......
cloth made with Plugin Stitch....
07-17-2002, 11:33 AM
I like it a lot especially the background, although I think it shouldbe entitled death rather than monk
07-17-2002, 08:07 PM
ok here is my critique:
the composition is really bad , putting the character in the dead center makes it visually boring. The background looks like a jpeg mapped on a plane , it looks flat.
i would recommend putting some mockup face and lighting it from under if you want to give a creepy look.
I must say that is very boring. I agree with sheep. More is needed than just a hood. A fallof mapped mesh face inside the hood would give it a gostly effect while still retaining the atmosphere, but it would have to be your face model not someone elses.
07-18-2002, 02:50 AM
ok...i'll try do this.....
01-13-2006, 11:00 AM
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