Monk

[DXtreme]

hmmm....i'm wondering what there should be shown to us?
all i can say is ... it's very dark, but a very cool very dark image!

[Negos]

Nice clothe's texture and cool atmosphere but, where is the monk?, I can't see his face. It would be nice to see the wireframe.
:shrug:

Sorry for my English.

[IgorL]

hehehe.....The picture will lose the bewitching effect if the person will be visible.....:shame:

[OrestesMantra]

For all we know that could be Richard Simmons. At least make his face a little bit visible. Cool image nontheless.

[wedge]

make his nose mouth and chin a little lighter, like the Emperor from my favorite movie series of all time!!!!!!


and NO, i'm not talking about Big Trouble in Little China.

[IgorL]

good....ok i'll try in future post update picture.....

by the way ...what you think about background????
:rolleyes:

[Flypaper]

The background is very "Gigeresque" -If you know what I'm talking about.

[beej]

i think you should make it more like your sketch show some features but hide most of the face with shadow. it kinda looks like you cheaped out now. colours & textures are cool.

[IgorL]

hm......there is wireframe......

head is not done......
cloth made with Plugin Stitch....

[moonman]

I like it a lot especially the background, although I think it shouldbe entitled death rather than monk

[SheepFactory]

ok here is my critique:

the composition is really bad , putting the character in the dead center makes it visually boring. The background looks like a jpeg mapped on a plane , it looks flat.

i would recommend putting some mockup face and lighting it from under if you want to give a creepy look.

good luck.

[Adam]

I must say that is very boring. I agree with sheep. More is needed than just a hood. A fallof mapped mesh face inside the hood would give it a gostly effect while still retaining the atmosphere, but it would have to be your face model not someone elses.

[IgorL]

ok...i'll try do this.....

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