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al-ali
05-05-2004, 10:29 AM
Hi people.. I have something to show yaa..

say something nice cause its my first thing to post here..


http://www.20six.co.uk/pub/s_sbaa1/black_emotion2.jpg


it is just pencils I used with some changes by the PHO-SHO 0.7
for the contrast stuff....

Woyman
05-17-2004, 04:52 PM
I don't know why no one has commmented on this yet. It's stunning. I really like the pencil work here.

The gradations, the detail in the eye. It's top notch stuff. You have a very unique style and would like to see more of your work.

Please continue to post here!

devilboi
05-30-2004, 10:09 PM
It is really wierd how little credit goes to some of the more interesting pictures around here. This pic is really cool it has a boldness to it.

I love it's moodiness with all the shadows and wierd paterns that lay over the top of the subject.
The forms that are built with all the shading and use of tone give it a feeling as if there is a depth to the picture.

There are technical things about it that I normally nit pic over in my own art; like the distortion of proportions used to exagerate a stylized look about the subject. In this case the distance between the nose and mouth should be shorter, in proportion to the distortion of her other features (matter of opinion); and I normally don't dig the style with large eyes drawn with a realistism sort of detail. But I really like this picture; it has a really cool feel to it.

I'd like to see more.

perfecti
05-30-2004, 11:18 PM
...hmmmm.... maybe it's just style ..... but that nose ... and eye seems too big .... but expression is nice ....

Max Stalker
06-04-2004, 10:35 PM
The eye is TOO big. Even for anime style.
And there are some problems with shadows on the nose and strange shadows on the right (right for the girl) cheek.
But still nice work.

Everlost
06-04-2004, 11:54 PM
i think those problems were intentional, not everything follows perfect human anatomy

peachstapler
06-05-2004, 12:09 AM
Originally posted by Everlost
i think those problems were intentional, not everything follows perfect human anatomy

1) great avatar Everlost
2) i do enjoy this piece a lot, unfortunately it seems a little flat but the design is great, i have no crits.

JARhead
06-05-2004, 08:08 AM
Change nothing , I like it just as it is . I too would like to see more of your work around here , good work !

al-ali
07-22-2004, 02:53 AM
thank u 4 these lovely comments

in fact this piece was drowen in 2004 as I post here

then I added a few changes on it ... like the contrast ...

I mean am using PINCL only ....


any way ... thanxhttp://www.20six.co.uk/pub/s_sbaa1/black_emotion.bmp

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