Vehicle: Volvo s60

[TimWoods]

its a good start, but that front nose needs some work.
[url]http://www.volvopalmbeach.com/i/2002/s60_a.jpg[/img]
theres a joint line missing, and the curves need to be chamfered in places. the bonnet slits run down, sharply, and transfer from the bonnet down to make the angle of the nose. you need to make yours sharper.
overall the shape is right, just try an get sharper angles where needed, and a general tidy up.

[Serial]

tim woods, thanks for the comment. yeah i'm going to make sharp edges and stuff after i'm sure that i've finished the main body, it's hell of a job to start doing some fixes if you got plenty of polygons in unsmoothed version

here's some update

http://www.kotiposti.net/serial/images/en_liten_volvo7.jpg

[Serial]

http://www.kotiposti.net/serial/images/en_liten_volvo13.jpg

http://www.kotiposti.net/serial/images/en_liten_volvo14.jpg


most recent renderings

[Serial]

http://www.kotiposti.net/serial/images/en_liten_volvo19.jpg
http://www.kotiposti.net/serial/images/en_liten_volvo20.jpg
http://www.kotiposti.net/serial/images/vanne_mat.jpg

[szyszek80]

hmm. well it obviously looks like you've got some good modelling skills, but I have to say there the front of your car still doesn't "fell" right... I can't quite put my finger on it, sorry :(
I like the back though, and the way you did the headlights... just not their shape somehow

[Gremlin]

I feel like your car needs harder edges, it seems too bubbly/soft.... but I like the way its progressing, specially the street background, looks great. nice style, very gloomy...

how may I ask did u get that look (with excess of green/blue hue saturation in the render) or is it just photoshop tweaking?

[TooMuchCoffee]

Street texture needs a bumpmap, it looks too flat.

[Serial]

szyszek80: thanks, yeah you're right about the front. there's some little thing that needs to be change that it would look more like volvo, but i can't find out what. i've been searching tons of pictures but still can't find out. of course the material of the lights little lacks the front, need to make them more shiny and lighter.

Gremlin: yup, few more won't hurt =). Rendering was done with bright yellow,orange and red hdr image, it gave nice color variation. then desatureted image little bit in photoshop, and added bit greenish color.

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