Still : Nature morte

[Emmortal1]

Not bad but a few things:

The composition of the frame could use some work. There really isn't a center of focus here, and not much of anything interesting. This could be fixed by setting a better camera angle and adding some more mood with your lighting. The shadows under the objects are way too black, lighting those up. The brick texture showing through on the wall looks like it's painted on, add some more depth to it and give it better bump.

[NicoDN]

Thnaks Emmortel, but... not more replies ? I'm disappointed

[ciccariello]

Fine work! I agree about the bricks, the wall texture is super, I don't think it needs the brick layer showing through. The overall mood is excellent. A bit of color in the shadows would help. The porcelian material is wonderful.

Nice job.

[arona]

really great work. looks like painting. :wise:

[ciccariello]

One thing you might want to check...the spoon resting on the saucer [lower center] seems to be going through the saucer rim.

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