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infested_ysy
04-30-2004, 11:08 PM
whoa, first time being here, i never knew art forums like this exist (and highly populated too!)

anyway, here's one of my recent artworks, any comments/crits on it?

http://server6.uploadit.org/files/1973131-28.4.04small.jpg :wavey:


here's some of my older drawings, should anyone be interested =p
http://server6.uploadit.org/files/1973131-3.7.03small.jpg
http://server6.uploadit.org/files/1973131-24.6.03small.jpg
http://server6.uploadit.org/files/1973131-drwfCELsmall.jpg
RainAndRedGlass
05-01-2004, 12:53 PM
You've picked up the anime style beautifully. Some of it reminds me of FLCL.
I wish my anime looked like this. But I'm too sketchy. And cartoony.
JMendes
05-01-2004, 01:01 PM
Many of the proportion are off, even for an anime style! Just take the first draw for instances! Look at his/her hands, and his/her belly! I think you'll get it!
Try to do more than just anime! Draw from life instead! It will give you another perspective!

Keep drawing!
sypherr
05-01-2004, 06:43 PM
Good sketch, heres whats wrong with it:

Fingers - They fingers of the right hand wrapping around the cat a too scrawny and a little rectangular.

Left Arm - The arm is a little too skinny compared to the right one.
shehrevar
05-01-2004, 09:03 PM
...infested_ysy, did you remove the pic, because it doesn't show up anymore?
shehrevar
05-02-2004, 09:42 AM
...it's back up!

...apart from the problems mentioned above, the face needs work too...the mouth looks a little strange...the ear looks a little off...

But it is a cute anime drawing, nice sketch!
jearley
05-03-2004, 01:16 AM
hi, nice manga style. i think the fingers are all a weird angle. also, the fingers' lengths are wrong. the length of the line between the forfinger and middle finger is too long. hands are tough i know. it just takes A LOT of practice to get them good. also, the openning in the mouth is a little too far from the edge of the face. i looked at the other three and they look good, but the girl's nose in the first of the three is way too low and so is the mouth. so, it seems like you have the style down, you just need to work on getting the body more correct. keep up the good work! :thumbsup:
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