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Baldasseroni
07-14-2002, 11:00 PM
Here`s a model for the CG movie "Code...Guardian" by Marco Spitoni www.cee-gee.net (http://www.cee-gee.net)

Any feedback is really appreciated :)


http://www.eklettica.com/images/artworks/thelostark.jpg
Joril
07-14-2002, 11:18 PM
Pretty cool!
Reminds me of "Indiana Jones: Raiders of the lost arc".
Comments: I think the box is to neat, every board is as long as the other.

Edit: omg! I've been looking for this image, since I saw it once a long time ago: http://www.cee-gee.net/Gallery/Images/JoinUP.jpg
nice!
JFrench
07-15-2002, 04:45 AM
It looks great. The shadows are too hard though. Something about the gold shaders bugs me but i can't place it....does anyone else see that too?
tkay
07-15-2002, 07:54 AM
Very nice! As mentioned above there could be more variation in those planks.
Baldasseroni
07-15-2002, 08:22 AM
Originally posted by tkay
Very nice! As mentioned above there could be more variation in those planks.

Yes, i think u are right about the too linear planks.
The crane and the ark should be fairly low poly models for a cg movie, so i did not put much detail , expecially in the crane.
I'll evaluate the possibility to put much detail and variations for this still image.
Thanks everybody for the comments!
Baldasseroni
07-21-2002, 12:29 PM
Ok..as u can see from the pic, i found time to put some little variationsin the plank of the crane :)
Joril
07-21-2002, 12:34 PM
looks better now. More random.
Only thing I can say now is that the planks still look to polished on the side where they were cut off.
behzad
07-21-2002, 01:44 PM
The base is too small to balance itself, make the base of the legs wider.

:lightbulb
leigh
07-21-2002, 05:54 PM
Nice work! :D
The crate is very cool :)
The gold also bugs me a bit though - it seems a bit too...ummm.... sparkly :shrug:
But then again, I guess it is the ark of the covenant :p
Marcel
07-21-2002, 06:20 PM
I think the gold could use more contrast. The gold is way too bright overall I think. It should have more spots where it's nearly black.

Try making the color darker, and up the reflections a bit.
Also, placing some whitecards (white objects with a very high intensity) in the surroundings might make your reflections look a bit more interesting.
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