Character: Actor

[dubge]

looks like Vin deisal(sp?)..aka riddick....aka..over paid actor.

Looks really good thus far. the only crit I can see thus far is his neck, around his adams apple . I think it comes out a bit too far. Keep it up man looking real good!

[niki]

really good ...
I think ... Vin Diesel??

[DAbuel]

Nice head! the only thing I would have to comment is the Ears seem to be sticking out to much! most ears by the Cannal are fush to the cheek! the ears seem like they were model seperate and added on! I would try to smooth out the area closest to the ear canal IMO! and maybe the eyes might need some work somthing about them dose not look right ! maybe the upper lids need to bee thicker? or it could be the brow line needs to be a lil bolder? I dont know but i know it needs some work!
Great work! keep it up! Oh do you have wires?

Actor I would have to agree with the everyone here so far! it looks like Vin!

[SpiritWalker]

very nice looking model

i was just wondering, i want to start modeling a human head, my first serious one. could u perhaps PM me and give me some advices? ill really aprriciate that (apreciate, appriciate, nope im still not that good when it comes to writing)

[orangefisk]

Hello fellas :)

dubge
Hey thanx man, Ill look into the areas you mentioned.

niki
Thanx Niki :)

DAbuel
Heya. I tried working with the ears a bit, they were modelled seperate, but for this model. You're maybe right about the eyes, but anyway, I tried to figure that one out in this update. Tell me what you think :)
And here you go - 3 wires for you :)

SpiritWalker
Heya - I PMed you. ;)

Update:

http://www.kevinandersson.com/wip/vin00.jpg

Front and sideview:
http://www.kevinandersson.com/wip/vin01.jpg

[Vnuk]

Hey orangefisk! Nice and clean mesh youve got there. I also think its vin :)

[orangefisk]

Vnuk
Wow - thanx man. I really love your human thread - it's just excelent!

Update

Render:
http://www.kevinandersson.com/wip/vin02.jpg

Flat shaded:
http://www.kevinandersson.com/wip/vin03.jpg

[DAbuel]

kevin Like the Latest Update!
Better looking! The eyes still looks a lil off i think the outter cornner of the eyes needs a lil fixing! Vin is not so Asian last I remember hehe! Great work so far! the wire is very clean! Do you have a Ref Image I can See? just to see what your seeing!
Keep up the good work!

[hypercube]

Looking good, can definitely see the improvements and likeness by leaps and bounds as you update..

Couple things I noticed after a google search I thought might help..

The bridge of his nose is maybe a bit too massive and round, most of the size of his nose is at the tip..

The lower lip is still a bit large looking, should taper off more towards the corners of the mouth..

The jawline is still feeling too huge, he's actually got something of an angular face, the roundness/volume down there appears to come from that pseudo-double-chin he's got..

I think what's lending the asian appearance is the corners of the eyelids being too far out, the amount of white on either side of the iris should be a little more even, and bring the bottom lid up..he always seems to be squinting.

here's a pic that kind of shows what I'm talking about..

http://www.bombafilms.lt/spaudai/fast/pic/Vin%20Diesel.jpg

Hope that helps, keep cranking..

[orangefisk]

Heya fellas.
Man, I'm pretty stuck. I tried to match the reference from Hypercube, but it just don't work I think.

Comments and helpfull suggestions are warmly welcomed :)

http://www.kevinandersson.com/wip/vin05.jpg

[SpiritWalker]

can u show us the reference so we can compair between the reference and the model?

[orangefisk]

Heya people. I've been deleting and modelling alot today. I don't know if there are any improvements, but anyway have a shot :)

http://www.kevinandersson.com/wip/vin06.jpg

[orangefisk]

Update:
http://www.kevinandersson.com/wip/vin07.jpg

[Teyon]

The bridge of his nose is flatter than what the highlights on your model would suggest. Nice work.

[orangefisk]

Hey hey :)
I worked a bit on the nose

http://www.kevinandersson.com/wip/vin08.jpg

[ThirdEye]

The tearducts are too extreme.
The overall shape of the eye seems wrong, especially the internal upper part
The skull of Vin is taller
The highest part of the nose should be flatter
Ears need some work
The upper part of Vin's skull is a bit larger

keep working on it, it's coming along nicely :)

[orangefisk]

Hey hey :D

http://www.kevinandersson.com/wip/vin10.jpg

[orangefisk]

Still looking for critiques and comments :)

http://www.kevinandersson.com/wip/vin09.jpg

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