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utek
07-13-2002, 12:22 PM
ok.
Just a litlle place for my beast :)

first look, it's a rough model, no details,
utek
07-13-2002, 01:25 PM
next one.
i connected leg with bodyhead, now i'm going into details..
Crash
07-13-2002, 09:53 PM
Hmmm I would add some muscles, coz now it looks a bit flat. And scan that concept Uti. :p
ZrO-1
07-13-2002, 10:00 PM
utek, welcome to the challenge. Could you maybe tell us what this beast is going to be? right now to me it looks like the start of a frog...but I can't tell for sure. Maybe if you have any sketches or a quick photoshop drawing or something to show us. That would make it a lot easier for us to give you constructive crits.
Crode
07-13-2002, 10:10 PM
a sketch will also help you model faster for the overall shape and proportions. keep up the good work! Dont worry about muscle definition until you have all the proportions correct.
utek
07-14-2002, 09:35 AM
oka
here are the sketches
i'll put more later
erilaz
07-14-2002, 09:53 AM
Is this creature amphibious? The tails suggest some kind of swimming action. I like that design.
utek
07-14-2002, 02:02 PM
no. it isn't amphibious, but the idea of tails come from octopus's tentacles
the creature is blind couse it works in mine
still got a lot to do :)
thx 4 all comments :)
utek
07-14-2002, 02:03 PM
and one more :)
utek
07-14-2002, 02:54 PM
ok. side look
now i'm going into details, or i'll start to make burden :)
dunno..
utek
07-15-2002, 01:08 PM
oka, an update.
i added some details to the head(body?) and made muscles more visible
TJViking
07-15-2002, 08:53 PM
OKI-DOKI ;-)

To give you some advices:

1. Shapes are too sharp. Try smooth some the areas on legs - it resembles partly some kind of the machine.. nor the organic beast.
2. Yup! It looks like a frog.. but try add some round shapes on the head. It is too mechanical and too schematic. Maybe adding some kind of eyebrows or shapening the areas around the eyes could help a bit.
3. The tail. Tail should be more massive to keep the beast in horizontal pose.

But the overal concept resembles the Monsters Inc Mr Ball - I like it very much!
utek
07-16-2002, 06:55 AM
hieh..
i rebuilt the tail, and changed the idea od contraption,
the burden will be placed on the tail (between 2 tails)

thanx 4 all comments and waiting for more :)
utek
07-16-2002, 12:44 PM
hiehie..
i found a one thing bout myself.
I LIKE HORNS!
dunno why but i LIKE IT :)
anyway here's the newest picture of "The Frog" hm.. no it dont look like frog anymore :)
nez
07-16-2002, 12:49 PM
looks scary :O

heh zapowiada sie niezly modelik.. GL & HF
Crash
07-16-2002, 12:55 PM
Hmmm, the modeling is nice although it's not superb. It lacks of some fluency that is typical to any organics, it looks like a plastic toy. The idea is not bad, you just must work on the muscle system.
utek
07-17-2002, 06:18 AM
allright, here's come update!

side
utek
07-17-2002, 06:20 AM
front
utek
07-17-2002, 06:21 AM
top :)
utek
07-17-2002, 06:23 AM
perspective
hehe
gimme some coments..
btw. I realy like horns :)
utek
07-24-2002, 10:55 AM
http://incix.shl.pl/~utek/zaba1.jpg

The Frog :)
erilaz
07-24-2002, 11:27 AM
Still looks a bit blocky, especially around the face and the entrances of the horns. I like the tail a lot. Nice amphibious/reptilian thing. :thumbsup:
utek
07-29-2002, 08:24 PM
http://incix.shl.pl/~utek/zaba3.jpg

Yo
Latest Render. only Cellular as a Bump :)
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