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ClementC
04-25-2004, 03:58 PM
Hello
this is my last home work, i did it with Max6 and Vray. It s the first time I use Vray,
I wish you like It :)
http://lopokin.free.fr/gif_images/Birdhouse.jpg

comments are welcome

francescaluce
04-25-2004, 04:05 PM
ah ok.. you're an intimist, aren't you ?!


nice, nice, nice.
cannot see so far any problems (maybe just the dof for the left top tree is a little bit too much... but probably is needed to get that nice composition.. without.. the little house will be a little bit naked.. I think).


:love:


ciao
francesca

K-design
04-25-2004, 04:20 PM
like the texture
did u use vrays disp.
:)

polycowboy
04-25-2004, 05:10 PM
That is an absolutely beautiful work of art. Thank you for sharing.

sacrefredo
04-25-2004, 05:49 PM
hehe very cute !!:rolleyes:

tu devrais mettre un p'tit wazo je pense que ca renforcerais le p'tit coté intimiste qu'il s'en degage !

en tt cas

i lke ur picture :love:

ClementC
04-25-2004, 09:42 PM
francesca :
Yes I am :D your are right the deep of field is a bit strong, but this is picture is completely different without dof.

K-design :
No, I use the old Bump :), The displace is very nice but useless here I think.

polycowboy :
Thanks :)

maxman :
je me suis posé la question de l'oiseau, mais ca change compeletement mon image, le but était de faire une maison a zoizo, et non un oiseau dans un decors , tu me suis ? :)
parcontre, si je fais un oiseau un des ses 4, je pense reprendre le meme decors mais avec un cadre different.

ambas
04-25-2004, 10:07 PM
oooh that looks very real

Aros
04-25-2004, 10:12 PM
Amazing! You might want to make the nails a tad bigger and add more specular / reflection to the leafs. :)

Polakow
04-25-2004, 10:25 PM
Really good image!
Intresting example to do something colse to photorealism, without matching it.
Good job!

Sorry for my ENG! :D

maucerichris
04-26-2004, 11:23 AM
very very super bo, !!!!!!! tu devrais te mettre a la 3d toi je suis sur que ca te plairais !!!

maucerichris
04-26-2004, 12:57 PM
very nice work, how many times for rendering?

otacon
04-26-2004, 07:59 PM
Thats cool looking! Its like were spying on the house waiting for a bird to pop its head out. Nice colors.:thumbsup:

AKAI
04-26-2004, 08:02 PM
very nice mood and very sweet feelings !!
:)
Si je peux me permettre d'etre un peu pointilleux( en fait tres pointilleux pour le coup he he ), la texture de l'epaisseur du trou est a retravaille, rien de mechant mais ca assez visible etant donne que l'oeuil est dirige vers cet zone...
les feuilles sont tres reussi...tres bO rendu !!

francescaluce
04-26-2004, 08:55 PM
Its like were spying on the house waiting for a bird to pop its head out.
:) otacon, but looking at your avatar will be hard for you to catch a bird...:)



ciao
francesca

ClementC
04-27-2004, 09:00 AM
if you want to see a wire :
http://lopokin.free.fr/wip/birdwip.jpg

rendering time is 41 minutes.

AKAI:
oui c 'est vrai que j ai un peu fait ca rapidos :)

Otacon:
thanks.

maucerichris:
:) tu as raisons

Polakow:
you are right ! :) something dont match.

Aros:
maybe specular on leafs will give some realism.

tacit:
thanks

r3studios
04-27-2004, 09:03 AM
very very nice work man! i really love your images. well done :bounce: :applause:

maybe add some birds poo! :D:cool:

mv
04-27-2004, 01:15 PM
nice mood. Really missing a little cute birdie though.

Goofster
04-27-2004, 03:02 PM
looks really nice!

I'm much worse at texturing, but I did notice something weird about the texture on the front of the house.

there doesn't seem to be any relationship between the model and the texture.

example: under the stick that sticks out of the house I would expect some green stuff from the rain dripping down, but instead it's really clean.

Awesome image though, finally a good use of Dof :)

Roel

DAREONER
04-27-2004, 03:37 PM
superbe, scene toute simple avec tout ce qu'il faut.

PiPS
04-27-2004, 03:42 PM
I like the pic but missing a bird ? no ???

slackjaw10
04-27-2004, 04:39 PM
Really nice, kinda like a still life. I love the leaves the way they are. My only crit is that, although I don't mind the DOF in the foreground and background (it emphasizes the subject better), I don't think there should be so much on the birdhouse itself. Why blur out the detail when it looks so good?

jeroenven
04-27-2004, 04:52 PM
first of all: AMAZING birdhouse. no crits at all.
The only thing i dont like is the way the leaves are blured in a way you can't even tell it's a birdhouse. I don't think you should not use depth of field, i would only use less. great work alltogheter

chrislomaka
04-27-2004, 08:14 PM
really awesome!

my only suggestion would be to subtly change the colors of the leaves in the back to be bluer/less saturated to push them back, and those in the front to be yellower (tho just a tiny bit) to bring them forward.

it should create enough visual depth to allow you to tone down the dof a bit.

Frenkie
04-27-2004, 09:19 PM
Cool!

I'd be nice a little transluciency on the leaves, if you have, sorry, i can't see it.
Anyway, really nice end real picture, and the theme of it also makes me happy :love:

Riptyde
04-27-2004, 09:58 PM
excellent job, I love it.

The only crit I have is that the wood could be warped and twisted a little .

keep it up.

amoin
04-28-2004, 01:19 PM
I love it. very nice work:applause:

cheybea
04-28-2004, 05:52 PM
nice work...i really like it

STARBUCK
04-30-2004, 09:47 AM
Houhaaa!

Nice job dude!
And what about having a little (even dead) bird?
You can also add few littles details on the mesh.

Keep on posting!

:drool:

ClementC
05-02-2004, 07:05 PM
hello,
after all your comments, this is the updated birdhouse, I realy love the DOF so i keep it strong :)

the bird is verry simple. I don't have more time for it :rolleyes:

I wish you like it

thanks

http://lopokin.free.fr/gif_images/Birdhouse_2.jpg

:wavey:

DAREONER
05-02-2004, 07:23 PM
l'oiseau est en 3d?? si c'est le cas chapeau:buttrock:

mv
05-02-2004, 07:24 PM
Yes! the bird really adds much to the piece...beautiful!

amoin
05-02-2004, 09:12 PM
realy realy nice!!! I prefer this one :bowdown:

STARBUCK
05-03-2004, 08:59 AM
Much better with some life form.
Keep the white background?
Nice job indeed!
:applause:

Shirley
05-03-2004, 09:03 AM
Très très joli !
Les couleurs sont très bien choisies, calmes et reposantes.
L'oiseau est bluffant ! le velouté des plumes est palpable.
Du grand travail !

fraa
05-03-2004, 09:42 AM
simple but stunning !
love it !

olive2d
05-03-2004, 10:05 AM
Yeeeaaaahhhhh!
great work Mr Clems!!!:thumbsup:

cat33
05-03-2004, 10:21 AM
Wow Mr. CLems.......Awesome work! The bird looks really good, and everything just fits. Nice texturing and lighting.

I really think the bird topped it off. :bounce:

Keep it up!

-Cat

kataklismo
05-03-2004, 10:28 AM
Well, i like the image very much, but as someone said, i think the DOF is too strong. I mean, first of all, i would not blur the house at all, i find it very unrealistic. Appart form that, the front leaves are too much and unrealisticaly blurred, showing as stains instead of making the composition richer IMHO. As it is a matter of taste, and you said you like the DOF as it is, just keep it that way, but sincerely i think it makes the comp disperse, broken. Maybe i would put the camera just a little closer to avoid too much leaves in the front.

ACantarel
05-03-2004, 10:31 AM
Very nice texturing! I really like it and it looks realistic :)

André

touf
05-03-2004, 01:30 PM
Wooooo !!
Rarely seen a so beautifull CG image !
:surprised
Just simple, poetic. Nothing unusefull. Maybe the Dof is too high, in my opinion.
Mr Clems is the best....
:bowdown:

capblood
05-03-2004, 06:54 PM
Much better now!
Great textures. Can we take a look to a low res diffuse map?

ClementC
05-15-2004, 04:37 PM
Hello

this is a small animation with the bird,
it is a test render, 4 days for rendering :surprised

you will see some mistake in this video but it is not the finale animation

Birdhouse_test1.avi (http://lopokin.free.fr/files/Birdhouse_test1.zip)

amoin
05-17-2004, 07:38 AM
vraiment joli mouvement de l'oiseau tres naturel ....bluffant:bounce:

touf
05-17-2004, 08:15 AM
Arf !! Mr Clems is now animator !! ;)
The Bird moves like a real one, difficult to do this kind of subtil animation, hard to make it credible. :surprised
Great work Mr Clems, still the best ! :thumbsup:

Touf, Serial Animator...

emorej2004
05-17-2004, 04:47 PM
clap clap clap clap
great lights captain :beer:

fmalmgren
05-17-2004, 07:34 PM
fantastic!! nothing more to add. So somple - so beautiful.
Nice...

/fred

amoin
05-26-2004, 11:33 AM
a quand un nouveau travail? j'ai hate de voir car enchanyé de cette maison d'oiseau....:p

DAREONER
05-26-2004, 01:53 PM
yeeees, bah voila, une ptite anim et ca le fait grave,
Pour regler tes problemes d antialiasing (sur le cabanon) met toi en adaptative subdivision en min.rate :1 max rate:4, impossible que ca foire sur l antialiasing pour du 2K, suivant ton format tu peux descendre un peu (pour du pal ) 1-3

Pour ma part je mettrai un peu de camshake et je ferai une mise au point animé.
en tous cas chapeau :beer:

sacrefredo
05-26-2004, 03:34 PM
hehe ! c bien tout ca !j'avais pas ton image depuis mon dernier post, mais je vois que tu a rajouté l'oiseau; et je prefere avec...
continue comme ça :beer:

zandernice
05-26-2004, 07:31 PM
Great DOF and image.

Valentina
05-31-2004, 12:48 AM
The wood is very realistic! I'm impressed!!!!:applause:

STARBUCK
06-02-2004, 03:40 PM
Nice job MrClems!
can't the bird spread its wings to take off? :D
And where can we see your new pictures?
See YA!

siye
06-27-2004, 04:17 AM
.......................:applause:

xjgd4321
06-27-2004, 04:31 AM
Very true work!

darktenp
06-27-2004, 01:18 PM
nice rendering.

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