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KEKS
07-13-2002, 06:49 AM
Let me know what you think of this composition please critique it !!!
http://home.attbi.com/~ke.ks/kekswork.jpg
http://home.attbi.com/~ke.ks/greedversion.jpg http://home.attbi.com/~ke.ks/redversion.jpg

ndat
07-14-2002, 08:35 AM
1st one sux badly, second is really good, and the third really rules. Id be carfull with color here it seems to make alot of difference. The design is good but seems a little complicated for me, with all the text... out of ten Id give the design an 8.3 because of its reademing quality of style, it seems to fall nicely toghther in a noble feel. The first color choice I would give a 5.6 because it just looks horrible. The second one withe the green I would give a 9.1 because it gives a mystic feel to your design. And the red scheme I would give a 9.2 because it just seems to fit better with everything.

-- Hope that helps, Adam

KEKS
07-14-2002, 09:15 AM
that is really interesting
I would like more people to coment on the coloring.
A lot of people liked the green but not the red and my original
color was red but I like the purpile feel too.
Interesting ... i need more feedback tho on why you like certain colors together.. is it something from color theory or is it just purly emotional response you get from certain colors?

cairo
07-15-2002, 04:03 AM
I like the third one the most because of the red which looks cool with those things radiating from the eye, but I also like the third one because the english text is absent. I think that the typeset for the word 'love' stands out too much and is not as slick as the kanji which doesn't have that rounded look, also the 'eyes of love' piece doesn't appeal to me that much either, I prefer that gate pattern or design at the bottom of the piece more. But then, I don't know if those elements are essential to the design or not...

KEKS
07-15-2002, 05:39 AM
thank you all for coments they are really helpfull to make it much
better at the end.

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