Character- Broadsword Traveller

[sypherr]

Nice pic but a few crits :)

Lightning - Looks abit basic, kind of spoils the depth of the rest of the image.

Lighting - Need some brighter lighting on parts of the character where the lightning bolt would reflect

Other than that nice work :)

[XavierG]

hey, nice moody piece man, here are my crits (kinda rushed, so i apologize for that)
- hand waaaayy too small for his body, face and for what hes holding, should be bigger.
-that handle at the end of the sword, i see no real need for it from a design point of view
- the main problem, the folds, you have too many that you dont need... not even for the sake of detail because a tad of them are not accurate anyways (remember, less is more!)
but its a nice job, i can see all the effort put into it, which i appreciate :D

[yowchuan]

Hehe...thanks guys...Points and suggestions taken.

Will put them into practice on my next piece.

I think my approach of going into detail in the beginning wasn't a very good choice. Since I was too stuck with the minor stuffs, I complete forgot about the big picture... :P Less is more! Couldn't agree more with that statement!

Those folds...yah...took most of the time~! :cry:

Thanks alot guys~!!!
Yow Chuan:bounce:

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