Female:Nadjia (nudity...)

[howiechin]

great work...love the body....

Since you won't be making any major changes...I'd just like to suggest anyway that her breasts are a little tiny...

But maybe it's my preference...

I'm currently doing an indian girl myself...hope it goes well...

Good luck to u and hello Nadjia :)

[LuWeeWu]

Its nice to see a female model that doesnt have huge breast for a change. I wouldnt like her as much if she was another silicone stuffed bimbo model. I would like to see some close ups of the head and textures. Maybe a wire for the fun of it. Ive nothing to crit at this point.

Good Job

[TomerEp]

Nice

[beccabaldwin]

i really love what you've done with the hair. really nice. i can't wait to see her in a pose!! :D

this has become quite the portfolio piece, you should be proud of yourself!

[Nazeil]

howiechin - thanks man. I might make changes if I think that they would help the overall piece, but as far as breasts I prefer them small ;)

LuWeeWu - here is a close up of the face, I'll get a wire out later

TomerEp - thanks :D

allaei - thank you, we'll see how a pose comes out...Im restarting the rig for the third time....isn't that one suppose to be the charm?

http://rainandash.com/critiques/nadjia_prog11.jpg

[Nazeil]

well rigging is mostly done, I still need to make the panties deform properly. Here is an update. Any critique welcome.

http://rainandash.com/critiques/nadjia_comp3.jpg

[Nazeil]

alright, I think that this is about done. I tweaked out some areas that looked funky and got the panties deforming right. Any thoughts would be greatly appriciated.

http://rainandash.com/critiques/nadjia_comp4.jpg

[Nicool]

Very good work!!
I like her curves... realy feminine!
I would work on the knee area (the muscles relationship/connection between the upper and downer leg. And the clavicle (relation between the neck, the rest of the body and the two symetrics parts... the cross) too.

[barclan]

Good work!

Just two crits: legs are too much thin for me. And I would get rid of dark areas in the skin; shadows are too black.

[Tynan]

Yay, finally, a female model with breasts smaller than her head!

I think you could use some more polygons in some areas, like the bellybutton (which looks like a diamond).

Also, the bridge of her foot doesnt go back far enough. Look into revamping her heel, it looks very weird.

[Nazeil]

well did some more fixes. Softened the clavical area and the neck muscles, made the shoulder smaller, tweaked the breasts into a more natural postion, worked on the deformation around the armpits, and some other general tweaking. Getting ready to hang this model up and start a new one, but any critique would be appriciated.

http://rainandash.com/critiques/nadjia_comp9.jpg

[ninjaboy]

hey, nice work...i didnt read all the comments yet, but if it hasnt been covered, i think the shoulders are a bit narrow. from what ive been told, the shoulder should be three heads apart and definitely not narrower than the waist, which it kinda looks like to me.. but nice work for sure, i would love to see a wire. later

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