Cartoon Scene: Sompin' Ain't Right Here

[Nisse0354]

It lock like in Finding Nemo.
God work.


:beer:

[metre]

Ha,ha :applause: ...nice and fun

[Wizdoc]

Looks great.

That octopus seemed to have too much coffee for his own good. :)

[brogh]

maybe the fish is to much colorless

in any case good:thumbsup:

[StephanD]

I'm not too much of an expert when it comes to cartoonish looks but I think the lighting could use some tweaking,right now,it makes the hooks look out of place.

Notice that you could also have stylized them and only used a flat color and it would have been as good IMO.

Great work!

[ThomasMahler]

Yeah, I also first thought of Finding Nemo.

I like it, nice picture, although the background is a little too blurry, me thinks.

[Q_B]

Eheheheh great!

What i really like on this image is the eyes, specially the blue one's.

The shaders look really good, have a soft touch.

What i think u really could improve is the modeling. Specially on the blue one.

And yes, i also love the Finding Nemo look eheheheh.

[ODoul]

Thanks guys. All suggestions noted. I'm anticipating being more active here at cgtalk since this seems to be the place to post if you are looking for serious critiques. Beware, I usually like to tell it like it is. heh heh -- Ray

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