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JHarford
04-19-2004, 08:51 PM
software : 3dsmax
final render before i move on.
1024*768 background
http://www.joeharford.co.uk/76a1024.jpg

and the a4 advert style.

http://www.joeharford.co.uk/76astrip.jpg

EthanMartin
04-19-2004, 09:13 PM
Model and render looks good. My suggestions would be to decrease the canvas width by 25 percent and decrease the white glow around the car. I would also allow more deadspace below the car - It's a bit close to the bottom right now.

ThomasMahler
04-19-2004, 09:26 PM
Ethan Martin is right, I'd also decrease the width - and not for just 25 percent. I think this ad would have a lot more style if it would look like a "filmstrip" - the width is just not necessary in this case.

But it already looks really cool, great render!

PS: I like the glow :-)

JHarford
04-19-2004, 10:34 PM
update - 1st post

Zixe
04-19-2004, 11:08 PM
Awesome. maybe get some side shots? :):)

MainlineX
04-19-2004, 11:24 PM
Awesome work!!!

Guybrush
04-19-2004, 11:57 PM
very nice image, but i would raise the camera a bit

Joebount
04-20-2004, 12:10 AM
Excellent choice for the gar :buttrock:
Really well executed modelling and rendering :buttrock:
Classical but strong composition :buttrock:

--> :buttrock: <--

JHarford
04-20-2004, 12:19 AM
another view
http://www.joeharford.co.uk/car.jpg

EthanMartin
04-20-2004, 01:48 AM
I love the angle and color temperature in the second shot. It would be interesting to see this angle in a billboard style layout. - beautiful car

kfc
04-20-2004, 02:39 AM
Sweet!
:D

the headline seem a little odd in the 3rd image 3/4 view.
could be because the area around it is too dark.
or maybe a little lack of detail in the dark area. could be because of ur lighting tho. but anyway, great job!
:applause:

ThomasMahler
04-20-2004, 07:54 AM
Hey JHarford,

I really like the A4 Ad style, looks great. If you'd lend me a few bucks I'd buy a Maserati for sure... ;-))

JHarford
04-20-2004, 10:01 AM
thanks guys :)

brogh
04-20-2004, 11:33 AM
looks good to me may be the first shot has a little too much glow around the car .... maybe

good

hv2
04-20-2004, 11:40 AM
Woow the model looks very good ! :bowdown:
The mod. & render is amazing ! Good job , i like that one...

JHarford
04-20-2004, 06:11 PM
thanks guys :) - i toned down the glow a little

JHarford
04-20-2004, 06:34 PM
http://www.joeharford.co.uk/72.jpg

USED
04-21-2004, 03:04 AM
joey jo jo... this is great...
I love the first three shots.. but I kind of think that last one could use some work...
the reflections are tooo intense in the headlight cover and front of the car..
tone down the out put on that map...or raize the camera a bit..
and your textures are nice, but to low rez for the image..
however I do think that it has potental:thumbsup:

furo
04-23-2004, 05:48 PM
A4 'version' is the best.. nicely done

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