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hundredthirtyseven
04-18-2004, 04:34 PM
Hi!

I wanted to create surreal scene, I hope you like it. Everything was modeled and rendered in Cinema 4D v 8.5, post work in Paint Shop Pro. Please tell me what you think, THX.

http://www.zenesznet.com/supremacy/onestep.jpg

brasco
04-19-2004, 01:15 AM
good picture, i like the idea -abstract. lacks depth, add some background fog, and depth of field with the camera.

love the tree did you use Xfrog?

later

hundredthirtyseven
04-19-2004, 08:33 AM
Thx, I've added some depth. The tree is Xfrog, converted to polys and tweaked manually.

Here is a wire image:


http://www.zenesznet.com/supremacy/onestepwire.jpg

jcbray
04-19-2004, 11:37 AM
Should the fog in the back ground curve a bit? personal taste really, just seems like it would fit better - though i have no idea how far its meant to be really.

hundredthirtyseven
04-19-2004, 12:47 PM
Here are some renders of the car...before the accident:)

http://www.zenesznet.com/supremacy/chevy1.jpg

http://www.zenesznet.com/supremacy/chevy2.jpg

brasco
04-19-2004, 05:50 PM
Nice model, the rust and worn texturing needs some work, looks a bit too harsh (the speckles). SLA right? try reducing the contrast on the noise channel. also water runs down so the rust kind of flows downward as well.

glass needs freshnel.

otherwise really cool, harpoons at the front and addition?

be cool to see a wire of the car after the crash as well

are you animating it?

ps is that a couch with a remote? not all that clear nice idea

:thumbsup:

brogh
04-19-2004, 06:04 PM
the concept is great, but I don't like the car's textures, in any case good job

Brogh

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