my birthday present--THE STRIKER

[Snoopy]

2:p

[Snoopy]

from the back:beer:

[Snoopy]

ok,looking foward to your ideas!:beer:

[ghengisjim]

Hey, I like your model. But as far as your layout and texturing go, I think you could make this still look alot cooler. I dont really like the thing that the plane is resting on. It takes away from the aerodynamics of the plane when you are just looking at it. And you are showcasing the plane itself, right? Also, although the plane itself is kind of (over-the-top), at least ive never seen one like it, I would consider toning down your texturing a bit.

I really like your model though and keep up the good work.

[playmesumch00ns]

I agree with ghengisjim, scrap the thing it's on. It takes away too much from the plane itslf: kinda looks like an extra pair of wings or something underneath in the first picture. You should consider just sticking it on a white ground if you're showing off the model.

I think your textures are fine, but you need to do some more work on the shaders: give it a diffuse, specular and bump map to bring the surfaces to life a bit.

Also try to figure out the lighting to define your model a bit more; you've done a nice model so show it off! Great style, keep it up.

[Snoopy]

well thank for your comments.i made the plane under the thing in order to make more details,but the result is no good.i will improve it,maybe only a large land without any textures is ok?

[Marcel]

Great stuff snoopy! Love the design and the textures!

One thing: Your propellors won't do a lot right now, they do not have the correct shape. Maybe you could make them a bit bigger too.

[JFrench]

i think you are headed in the right direction with the textures. they are really stylized, which is great. i agree with adding a bump map and possibly specular.
an untextured ground plane will work great.
also, a lot of people don't realize how important lighting is. good lighting will really add nice weight to any model.

[Snoopy]

yes,i have improved the land----i used a un textured land,i think it will do good.and some other,in fact i have used bump and
specular map in the model,but maybe the image quality is not good enough to show.
thank you for all your comments!i will do better.

[Snoopy]

i improve the image.is it ok?

[WAVK]

Wow! Great style, detail and texturing!:airguitar

Have fun,

WAVK

[sarfarazsoomro]

hey nice work...

Good luckfor the next time:wavey:

[JFrench]

Those shots look much better. Again, I like the stylized look you gave it.
Don't the propellar blades need to be rotated 90 degrees though?

[Snoopy]

then i create a huge spider to be destoryed by the striker.see it!

[Snoopy]

something about the spider.
and in last image,i typed the word "perfect" incorrectly.very sorry.

[stephen2002]

those are some really neat pictures. I really like the spider thing...it seems to use many of the same materials as the airplane.

The plane looks a lot better without the strange thing that it was sitting on.

[zerg]

o~~
i am a chinese too
i like it very much

[Totitch]

:eek:

Great stuff! Rivet are maybe too big but it's probably the way you choose!

good good work!

[LoneLobo]

yeehaw, you are a great modeller!!

The Striker was very very nice, but the spider is just amazing!

could you please post a bigger render of it?

I would be glad to use it as a wallpaper :)

[Joril]

very stylish!:thumbsup:
I'd like to see a close up of the spider.

[bioni]

Very Good model and concept !

The only point I would like to comment is the material... It's very smoothed. But Everything is great.:bounce:

[SGT.Squeaks]

I like the spider!!!! it kind of reminds me of the giant spider in Wild Wild West.


NICE JOB!!!!:applause:

[flamedevil]

Very good work. :thumbsup:
I like the architecture of th model
Can we see the wireframe view ?

[Snoopy]

i render a wireframe view,showing its architecture.
the striker:

[Snoopy]

the spider

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