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peppy
04-15-2004, 12:15 PM
this is the first time i post my art here so have fun and critic all you want i bet i need it. im 17 at the moment and most of my art is cartoonish for the moment till i take classes and learn otherwise.

sorry if i have to link you to the motionzoo forum but my website cant handel the bandwith right now (crappy geocities).

http://www.motionzoo.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=1187

CGmonkey
04-15-2004, 11:22 PM
You have the exact same style as I had when I begun training in life drawing. You got a pretty good idea over mass and stuff..

I definetly want you to develop the character more, redraw him with more character perhaps? Because I can see images of him with great character, giving more attention to a facial expression. Right now he seems to be caught while he stabbed someone and just being surprised but he looks like a mean selfish bastard so you could really make him grumpy!

Anyway, just my 2 cents on how you can develop him as a character. It's pretty hard to say "anatomy is off" when it's cartoon and your own style :)

Keep up the great work and good luck with the drawing 'n stuff!

perfecti
04-15-2004, 11:46 PM
.. always loved that kind of style ! coool ! CgMonkey is right .. here is nothing to say but need to wish you luck ! keep working !

peppy
04-16-2004, 11:55 AM
thanks.... Ill draw him with diffrent facail exprsones etc...

I've been working on hands lately since my last attempt at hands was horrible, when i first begun i couldnt even bend the arms into position.

anways here some more of my art.... i havent updated my art that much but soon i should have it all on the web on a stable place.

http://silverdrakes.org/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=7

thats on a friends site which is hosting some of mine for now.

ill keep you updated!

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