character: ISO

[silverflaime]

Really good for little experience. A couple things I would watch out for are how the fingers join eachother on the hands. For characters, typically you will want a wider, smoother spacing for finger-webbing. As far as the texture goes, I think the label should be a little smoother, just blur your bump map a bit, and tighten up the specularity. And I think the eye lids should be the same for continuity. And maybe a little less contrast on the black part of the case. It's good to break up the colour, but make it a little more subtle. Other than that, not much else I can suggest, other than keep it up!

[gf666]

he thanks for the advice silverflaime, gonna start the re-moddeling soon i hope!!

just wanna get some more crits...

[gf666]

no comments and crits? come on people.....

hey and a BIG THANX in advance ofcourse

[Supervlieg]

The arms and legs need more work, you might wanna look for a tutorial about legs and arms. The film casing looks nice, though the bumpmap is a bit overdone. I thought the sticker was always a flat surface.

Succes ermee!

[marc31]

It´s funny
Rebuild details of the spheres and eyes´curves, that do not see lines, only perfectly curves.
You can put on the texture the number iso of the film, you can make more characters, iso 100, iso 400...

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[gf666]

yeah that's a great idea, like creating a whole family.. Mom, dad some kids! Cool, I want to start remoddeling ASAP..

Try to post some scetches soon

[Perkar]

you should project other methods of rotation in elbows and knes becouse i don't how he rotate the arm - he don't have muscles :) make it like in robots or mechanical suff... its my objection/opinion :) make it as you want :) generally looks nice

[gf666]

thnks perkar!
i know what you mean about bending the arm and knees. i've thought about making them mechanical but i wanted to create a character which looks like some kind of toy for little kids..

but maybe an more adult version with mechanic augmentations, some flesh growing over its metal joints. behind a mounted machine gun shooting all the non-fuji costumers...and..then....
ehrrr..where was i?

[kvernon]

That looks like it would be some fun to animate! Looking at him now, the eyes seem to shiny in comparison to the rest, but not major critiques here.

[gf666]

hey kvernon thanx for your reply, did not expect that anyone would still do that...!! to be honest i haven't tried 3d animating much, so i have not much experience....i hope i will learn well, expect updates soon!!!

[gf666]

not continuing this thread anymore but please check:
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=155255 (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=155255)

regards gf

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