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Goro
04-12-2004, 12:23 AM
Hi!

Just finished a new photoshop painting. Took me about
5 hours.

C&C are always welcome!

http://www.area-56.de/pics/speedpaints/sp_0037.jpg

Animator395
04-12-2004, 12:34 AM
Very nice I love the lighting. Girl looks very comfortable and into her music. Nice job.

animquer
04-12-2004, 12:40 AM
You should spend another 5 hours, well meybe just 3 hours (:-)) painting to adjust the contrast (becouse there is to litle of it) and gradation (more gradation needed) and it will be a great picture for someones room poster,,,,

hope this helps....:thumbsup:

Man
04-12-2004, 02:25 AM
looking great

but her mouth is a bit odd, looks a doll's mouth

nice work though:thumbsup:

whitebug
04-12-2004, 02:56 AM
i love the lighting.. done very well.. and her pose is good.. :)

FerdiWillemse
04-12-2004, 09:24 AM
I love it! Looks like a girl for me :)

The only minor things I've noticed are her right hand; It's looking kinda weird.
The other thing is the edge of the bed. It looks a bit too sharp, like it's not anti aliased :D

Other than that it's loooking very very good IMO!:thumbsup:

Sousuke
04-12-2004, 10:40 AM
Very nice.
Korekoso hikarito kage desune.
Sankouni narimasu.
Sorewa souto bokumo iPod hoshiinaa.

Pibre3d
04-12-2004, 12:34 PM
I llike it very much. It has a very nice feel to it.

Why didn't came my iPod with a girl like that...

Goro
04-12-2004, 01:17 PM
thnx everyone! I'm glad you like it!

animquer:
Thnx! This was supposed to be a speedpaint so this is
the original resolution of the pic :cry:
While I was painting I went more and more into detail.
So I don't think that I will spend more time on this.

Man:
Maybe the lips are too dark. I'll try to lighten them up.

FeRdI:
Indeed I didn't realize that edge thing. I'll fix it!
I'll check the right hand also. Thnx for your crits!

Sousuke:
Arigatou gozaimasu!
Konkaiwa shirokuro de charenji shimashita.

Pibre3d:
yeah:) they would sell much more iPods

Goro
04-12-2004, 02:51 PM
OK I just fixed the edge of the bed, did some work on the right hand and made the lips brighter.

picksel
04-12-2004, 02:56 PM
cool stuff man! It's original on b/w.
This was supposed to be a speedpaint so this is
the original resolution of the pic
While I was painting I went more and more into detail.
So I don't think that I will spend more time on this.


Don't worry! I have the same probleme. I'm so concentred on my work than I put more and more details...and the work and work is almost finished! :blush:


besides it is very beautiful and that gives freshness

:thumbsup:

Garma
04-12-2004, 09:47 PM
I love the way she looks relaxed, nice catched. Too bad the resolution isn't too high. Very lovely.

Goro
04-13-2004, 04:16 PM
thnx!

Garma:
I recently started to create daily paintings. Everyday at least
one picture. So I draw in very small resolutions. Too bad...
I'm posting them on www.sijun.com under speedpaints btw.

OrcOYoyo
04-13-2004, 08:04 PM
realy very good picture Goro :)
i like her expression. quite relaxed somehow.
there is something strange with the crossed legs.
i dont know what exactly it is but the shading looks wrong on some places. plus im not sure if the shape is all correct there.
nonenthless a very good pic :thumbsup:

omengeorge
04-13-2004, 08:17 PM
Sweet picture :D love the pose she is laid out in and the lighting. very good speedpaint this:D
love,
Omen:applause:

Goro
04-14-2004, 08:32 PM
OrcOyoyo:
oops your right! The shape is not correct indeed....I see also
the shading problem. Maybe I'll fix it. Thnx for your crits!

omengeorge:
Thnx! I'm glad you like it!

Polygon Origami
04-14-2004, 10:52 PM
Her right hand and looks odd to me; seems too far of an outward angle... or maybe her arm angle is too inward? Not sure. The pose itself is good; she has a nice expressive gesture. Lighting is well done too. Nice speedpaint.

prasa
04-16-2004, 10:13 AM
really nice ... and great light

Goro
04-17-2004, 08:00 PM
thnx guys!

Rameez
05-03-2004, 07:43 AM
I like ur idea of showing the model half in shade and half lit with sun shine.
Did u color it latter?

cr0ss
05-03-2004, 05:19 PM
nice girl ... :drool: (sweet :p)

and i really like the lightning. very realistic, pal.

Riddick
05-04-2004, 10:48 AM
Lovely picture.
There is maybe too much details on the face, regarding of the rest of the picture.
But it is really great.

Goro
05-04-2004, 09:02 PM
Rameez:
I didn't colorize it. It was just a lightvalue study.

cr0ss: thnx!

Riddick:
Thnx It's an honor for me to get a post form you!
I agree about the face. Thnx for your crit!

Quansie
05-05-2004, 07:36 AM
Great work!
I hope someday I can make something like that in 2d or 3d!

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