View Full Version : Machineflesh 2D Challenge Entry: Duylinh Nguyen
04-09-2004, 01:14 AM
Duylinh Nguyen has entered the Machineflesh 2D Challenge.
04-09-2004, 01:28 AM
Hey, this is my idea so far for the machineflesh competition. It's my first serious competition i've ever joined. Wish me luck.
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04-09-2004, 02:40 AM
Here is a basic concept i have so far. I might change it later.
04-09-2004, 03:32 AM
Here's another Idea that I have
04-09-2004, 03:45 AM
Nice poses :) the second looks like its in a baby position still in the womb. Maybe u should do some kind of regenration chamber or something would look cool :)
04-09-2004, 06:54 AM
The first drawing is much more dynamic right now. I think the second drawing , though good, needs an evironment to explain more. Good Luck:thumbsup:
04-11-2004, 10:08 PM
With what you have I think it depends on what you want to portray....
The first is very active and looks painful....
The second is still and looks quiet.....to contrast the still peice, I have to agree that you need to explain more of a story in imagery.....Although it has the potential to be very beautiful or attractive to the eyes(I apologize for the typos, I am on a soft keyboard and I don't think I will ever get used to it...)
the painful/angry one needs a little explanation as well, so we understand why there is that reaction. Maybe something to move us into sympathy with him? Or something to horrify...
Just my two ents - hope it helps in the developement
AND GOOD LUCK (this is my first too, so I am abit nervous)
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