Machineflesh 2D Challenge Entry: Duylinh Nguyen

[jlnsatome]

Hey, this is my idea so far for the machineflesh competition. It's my first serious competition i've ever joined. Wish me luck.
http://www.geocities.com/jlnsatome/Duylinh_concept.jpg :D

please use [url] instead of [img] for geocities

[jlnsatome]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3236/3236_1081474810_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3236/3236_1081474810_large.jpg)

Here is a basic concept i have so far. I might change it later.

[jlnsatome]

http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3236/3236_1081477969_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/challenge/entries/4/3236/3236_1081477969_large.jpg)

Here's another Idea that I have

[sypherr]

Nice poses :) the second looks like its in a baby position still in the womb. Maybe u should do some kind of regenration chamber or something would look cool :)

[SideAche]

The first drawing is much more dynamic right now. I think the second drawing , though good, needs an evironment to explain more. Good Luck:thumbsup:

[Shinwa]

With what you have I think it depends on what you want to portray....

The first is very active and looks painful....

The second is still and looks quiet.....to contrast the still peice, I have to agree that you need to explain more of a story in imagery.....Although it has the potential to be very beautiful or attractive to the eyes(I apologize for the typos, I am on a soft keyboard and I don't think I will ever get used to it...)

the painful/angry one needs a little explanation as well, so we understand why there is that reaction. Maybe something to move us into sympathy with him? Or something to horrify...

Just my two ents - hope it helps in the developement

AND GOOD LUCK (this is my first too, so I am abit nervous)

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